Wow, will Kayode be in any soup? I don’t know yet but let’s watch out and see how the story all unfolds.

Thanks for stopping by @LONE

@legend916, thanks for reading and commenting and welcome to NS

an interesting read

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What beautiful lines
well-written
well-rendered
and well-read
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I’m loving this more and more.

This is good…waiting for the next.

@AudreyTimms, you’re always always welcome…inviting you to check out my story at http://www.naijastories.com/2014/08/boss-wife-episode-10/ and comment, good or bad.

@Tai, nice constructions…and the story, just intriguing

Trouble! Trouble!! Trouble!!! but let’s wait and see.

Thanks a lot for your admiring followership @schatzilein

Are we ec]xpecting something more from Tayo? I’m loving the way you write.

Keep pushing on

Nice but not well-rendered. You still have to work on your punctuation and paragraphing. You should give a lot of spaces in between paragraphs in order to present the story well.

Keep writing

U’re welcome, always

U’re welcome, always

@Hextophar, all your kind observations are well-taken and I’m working to render some more thrilling episodes…just read along and get the fuller gist.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting

Had waited for this…it’s still interesting. Keep them coming

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I read through with love
in a way comely like a dove
and lovely like my bosom friend
with whom we disagree as we tend
but friends […]

When I drink
I begin to shrink
vomiting venom
as noun and pronoun

a good poem poet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

This story has spurts of potentials and I certainly will be doing myself some good by following it.

Nice nice start

I was expecting more after paying some points. Anyways, it’s quite nice…………………