Kindly send me a copy quickly at innoalifa@yahoo.fr for my appraisal.

Congratulations!

The beginning of redemption is the accepatance of one’s sinfulness. I really enjoyed this truth-telling tale.

Nice but you can be better. You don’t need to get sloppy even as you’re ageing. Age, you know, is a mental construct.

This is so “literalicious”

Emotionally gripping

What a immersed in the waters of literary imagination and creativity.

A beautiful one. @Folakemi

Not surreal
but really real
loving and loving it

Next please

What’s there to write
what’s there so bright
what’s there so insighting
what’s there so foresighting
what’s there so hindsighting
but to just write and be

This is revealing
as it’s soothing
in the telling of a tale
that sings farewell
to a dead whose death stories abound

Of course
without force
this is nice
and full of spice

well done @Hullerj

Before I self-destruct
I need to construct
or perhaps reconstruct
the reality or I get stuck

you can be better @brytand

I think this is just the start of a serialized memoir abi?

I’m just joing the train, waiting to see how the story unfolds. I’m yet to get the direction the story is going.

I’ve been kind of missing. This is an amazing piece of fiction, though not without some errors as @Afronuts has rightly highlighted.

It’s still an excellent story though.

I’m joining the train just in time. This is a realistically possible stroy.

Waiting for the next…

First and foremost, this is a realistic story, one that I can relate with but it’s flawed with grammatical, let’s say syntactic, structural or/and typographical errors. For instance, “He sat down on the floor and […]

@@ufuomaotebele, NS is home. I’m elated to be back again, I’ve kinda been missing you know…

And I’m back
with nothin to lack
seeing the splendour of words
used to reconstruct mental worlds

This one captivated me @ufuomaotebele

@kaymillion, hmmm