“…garbage collector by day and a fuji singer by night…” Hmmmm… Nice.

Short and sharp…lime and lemonade-like…good.

Hehehehe…very funny…the end that is…

Interesting…However, the scene where Awele interrupted the prayer session with the pastor needs more ‘swag’… More ‘real time’ emotions.

Good piece. Nice twist. But it seemed a little bit rushed.

Hmmmh…we can forgive, but we mustn’t forget. It is important that we put as much distance as possible between ourselves and the people that ‘hurt’ us.

Tight!

History, history…Sobibor comes to mind…nice…

Kids would always be kids. Guardians should prepare them emotionally and psychologically at home, and not spring ‘such surprises’ on them…especially in the midst of their peers…

Hmmm… Let this not be a case of “Sorry, we gave you the wrong result”

Evocative…one can relate with this on different level… Beautiful.

Intriguing… With a hearty dose of poetry…

Hmmmm…well, Ok, I guess…but Zel’s dialogue(s)…so flat…I couldn’t really get the ‘feel’, the emotions…

Hmmmm… The irony of life…

Menh! Totaly love this…maybe, because i had a similiar experience years back… But, I love the way it is written…kudos!

Goodluck with this piece.

Nice. Trending…this will be the fourth bible-funky story i ve read on NS.

excitingly interesting…

Nice. i actually felt the tension. Good stuff.

Funny how men can love more than one woman at the same time, and there seems to be nothing wrong with it…not so for women…hmmmmh…

Good storyline…but the emotions are just not there…flat

When fiction became non-fictiion…this sure is it! Vivid? Yes! Love this line ‘…stuffing the air with the loud cries…’

Nice and packed…

Flowery cheery

The bondage of blood! Kudos.

Wow!

Eze! A pseduo knight in clay armor…

Great stuff! Absolutely!!!

Lovely. Great ending. Kudos.

Ah! Not funny for Pelumi at all!