Flavor nabania will do better with these lyrics .

First of all i don’t know what genre this could be called. It sounds like a body of an informal letter chopped out for reference, however it’s a good read without the many grammatical errors ranging from concord […]

what is this? A poem or an intended nursery rhyme? I don’t know why admin should approve this kind of think. If you don’t like my comment change your ways and stop writing this kind of thing.

this looks exactly like one of my poems! I love the images created of eagle preying on nothing and of a madman going nowhere. Good one. i cant criticize this effectively because it looks like how i write.