Nicely done. The continuity could have been better, but it still works. I was a underwhelmed by some bits of it (the barren couple trope for example), though the meshing of the various viewpoints was engaging. I […]

@Olan, thanks for the kind words, and I hope you enjoy the rest of my work

@dkny111, thanks. I didn’t think anyone would notice the subtle Naija hint there

@elovepoetry, hopefully more interesting than painstaking!

God, this was depressing! Very evocative even if it made me want to slit my wrists at times. Nicely done, but next time hold back a bit. I felt like you deliberately laid it on thick.

Brilliantly done.
I choose not to highlight the obvious errors because that’s already been done ad nauseum.

I do have a few questions, though.
1) What’s with all the underscore signs in the third […]

@uzomaumekwe, thank you.

@JinxOssi, thank you! You’re one of the 3 people who actually got that this was not a humorous piece or a “cliche”

@Afronuts, I cry your pardon, please.

Interesting. I liked it a lot

I hope there’s more? Please say this isn’t all there is!!!

@laworemike, thank you

@sarah, thank you

@jaywriter, thanks

I love it!

Interesting…

@deazl09, thank you

@excellency, thanks. But I wouldn’t call it hilarious, myself

@Olan, thank you

@topazo, thanks for reading

@Inthequiet, true!

@kodeya, like I said, the list is a compilation of replies I got from asking a bunch of different women the same question. When I have a man in my life, maybe he will do some of these things, or maybe none of […]