@shai…this ya metaphor…. I really gat something τ̅ơ̴̴̴͡ say on this O°˚˚˚ …this one deep, seems you were saying something about……..
Never mind!
You don sealed ya lips with glue then I ain’t gat thing […]

@naboulove, this is an interesting but I must say, your descriptions made me skipped some parts of the story to get to the real point..
Hope u will have time to revisit this; too much descriptions often kill good […]

Good one @babyada
Ditto Seun’s comments on this..

All in all, I enjoyed reading this….
Cheers

OH NO!!! Whata heck, didn’t know you are this “good-naughty” girl @sibbylwhyte……hahahhaahha

Good story, just had to forgive ur fone a little for those error, guess we have thing in common…’typing on […]

Nice one here, I don’t have the time to analyse this (wish I have)……Sex n Sex in the air>>
Ur love affair was not well spelt out for me; it looks more unreal to me…..

I like the way story by the way… […]

Oh not again, this is too sad…. So sad;
You write well,
Good one… Well done

Wow scopeman, I can only but wonder at your magnificent write-up
I throw-way salute to him that deserved it. This your thing is really full of quotable quote
“she needed direction to departmental office….I […]

@banky, I really love this story; though a good write up but I felt something were not properly disclosed
1. I felt the story is a little bit truncated when narrating Ūя̲̅ meet up with cynthia…you should have […]

@Sun-Odukoya; Good story you have there, can’t wait to read part 2.
My thinking is that the girl is not pregnant….
She just wanna discuss some issues relating to their relationship but, I pity the guy cos’ […]

Ditto @shaifamily

Wow!!! who would have thought this story will have “happily never after”……. See wetin chloroquine caused!!

Good man, had my mouth opened wide in laughter…

“The guy who puked over chi” indeed!!!!!

Wow!!! good one man..
How come I never see this before?

I second you on that @sibblywhyte…

Yhemie, I wanna know whatz making you highhhh…ooo

*my lips are sealed*****

Good story though but couldn’t flow with it…was a little boring for me.
You had a good meessage to pass across but the conversations was a bit slump(y)…

“You must find a way of keeping there” (him).

*Pour me water*…….
“Before destruction comes eruption of pride”….
Nice one dear and thoughts provoking….
hope all men learn from this and place their priority(ies) right….

*Thump Up*

I love your descriptions and the sequence of the write up though;
Hope it won’t become boring as the story progresses in the tiny-line between love and hatred (my thinking though)

Good one..

@aturmercy do not worry…it is just a phase….
But, you can beg or apology in time as sambrighttomo has rightly said lest you do crazzzzzy things as sibbylwhyte has “prophesied”…

Lol

Nope… I’ve read 1,2 and 4………….
I’m yet to see the end of the tunnel where the great light awaits the MC in chapter 4 of your story

Wow………. Lagos palaba…
Asks for direction, prepare to journey to hell
Good one……really good one…

Interesting story… Like your details of the story….

Wow! You got me hooked….interesting read….
Good work though….

Good one, though very short……

Nice read…..
You write well……. Part 2, please.

I love your story but like others has pointed out, it’s really bias……..

Putting all the blame on the woman; whereas the man is the captain and the pilot of such act.

If a woman is seductive can’t you […]

Nice read man..
Love the message, clear and understandable.
Kudos

Wow….@raymond 比凶悍背道而驰……….
Ride on… You remind me of “Assassination Game”……