Cool writeup. Erm, I don’t think amadioha, ogun, buddah, baal, etc is the God I worship o… In essence, I don’t think we all serve the same God…

Welldone.

Hmmmmm. This your gift ehn, e get as e be. Did this happen for real?? Wow. But you have to read next time sha.. This one na just saving grace.

Welldone.

This is really beautiful. Well written and well told. Welldone ‘yourself’. Lol.

Wow!! Why didn’t I see this since. This seems so real. The friendly sensual jokes they shared added some originality…. And by the way, with 40D sized bust and 26 inch waist. How does she walk?? Lol.

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I dunno how to explain but I know the only fault with the story is the end… Maybe I was expecting his emotions to be different after he discovered it was a dream or I was expecting you to give us expo on […]

Hehehehehehe… They don talk am finish… Beautiful story babes. Well done but ehn, shey you know say you no promote safe sex… But I forgive you sha cos your story rocks.

Wish you the best dear.

Lwkmd…. And you are a guy o yet you pictured the mentality of a rich spoilt teenage girl perfectly. This is really hilarious. Can’t stop laughing… Really funny and steamy..

Well done jare and best wishes.

This is sweet in a sad way. Brilliant writing. Very welldone lulu. Wish you the very best.

You are a wonderful writer.

Seun, this your story is good o but the end is somehow. You have all they required in your story which I think is very cool. The punch others are complaining that is missing has to do with the end I guess.

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Ok. I had in mind to say that the story woulda been better with only fiyin but others have said it but I’ll still say this…

Fiyin died but many things happened while she was alive. you didn’t go deep into […]

I like this one. Its good. Best wishes.

Hmmm. Which mum let’s her under 18 year old son spend the night in ada’s house?? Abi was he really a big boy?…. Then he gives her a ring, hope its not key holder ring o cos I wonder where the money came […]

I think the story is cool although, I expected small cata cata before the makeup sex.

Wish you the best.

The message was neatly passed but the delivery was somehow. I mean the telling and all that has to do with packaging.

wish you the best.

To tell you the truth, this is a competition and I’ll do you no good by trying to be nice… I really didn’t finish the story. I couldn’t. You should have given someone to help you edit since its a […]

I think this story is good. Really good.

This needs editing o. I saw a couple of typos… And you are a guy. No wonder the soul in the story was missing. Woulda been better if the guy was the mc.

Good job anyway..

This was too long. Better stop her o. Erm, is that a fictional drug? Never heard of it before. Your story is good even though the length made me dizzy a lil.

Well done.

Scopeman, you have done justice to this. I felt like I was watching it on a screen while I read. The sex was not soo ‘adult’ yet, very romantic. You have my support.
This is perfect. Beautiful. Very well done.

The poem long o,*phew*. Nice message.

The rhymes are good. As for the poem, I’m confused.

The guy don die for girl wey no even tell am her name. So funny.

I like the rhymes but as seun said, it would have been better as a story. Still good anyway.

Lol. Why you come leave me high and dry, you this man eh. I was expecting some really rugged thriller and you come carry this joke wey I don see before… I don vex.

Its cool sha. You are soo good at creating […]

@sibbylwhyte, which browser are you using?? It appears perfect on my phone. Those lines aren’t together on my phone. I noticed that there’s a difference between my phones browser and opera mini. The arrangement […]

CHAI!!! I salute. This isn’t scary while reading, its scary after reading. I don’t blame the guys sha… Taking advice from an untrusted, unserious looking policeman who they’ve never seen before…

I wonder […]

I specially love the tittle. I like the feelings in the poem.. Where have you been?? Good to have you back.

Cool poem. I like it.

Huh???? There’s nothing wrong with the imagery and it is well edited except for the use of small letters in the beginning of each line…

I like your poem jare. Poetry doesn’t have to be long to be poetry afterall, haiku poems are good too and they are super short…

Well done.

Shallow minded ones!?!?! Like any of your lengthy poems is better than this.