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gooseberry commented on the post, Imagine 13 hours, 39 minutes ago
Cool writeup. Erm, I don’t think amadioha, ogun, buddah, baal, etc is the God I worship o… In essence, I don’t think we all serve the same God…
Welldone.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Beyond the Physical 15 hours, 30 minutes ago
Hmmmmm. This your gift ehn, e get as e be. Did this happen for real?? Wow. But you have to read next time sha.. This one na just saving grace.
Welldone.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Waiting For My Daddy 15 hours, 47 minutes ago
This is really beautiful. Well written and well told. Welldone ‘yourself’. Lol.
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gooseberry commented on the post, A Touch Of Spice 1 day, 6 hours ago
Wow!! Why didn’t I see this since. This seems so real. The friendly sensual jokes they shared added some originality…. And by the way, with 40D sized bust and 26 inch waist. How does she walk?? Lol.
You did […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, The Basics Are 2 days, 23 hours ago
I dunno how to explain but I know the only fault with the story is the end… Maybe I was expecting his emotions to be different after he discovered it was a dream or I was expecting you to give us expo on […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, To a Brother, with Love 2 days, 23 hours ago
Hehehehehehe… They don talk am finish… Beautiful story babes. Well done but ehn, shey you know say you no promote safe sex… But I forgive you sha cos your story rocks.
Wish you the best dear.
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gooseberry commented on the post, My other other secret diary 3 days, 8 hours ago
Lwkmd…. And you are a guy o yet you pictured the mentality of a rich spoilt teenage girl perfectly. This is really hilarious. Can’t stop laughing… Really funny and steamy..
Well done jare and best wishes.
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gooseberry commented on the post, The Scent of Waters by Lulufa Vongtau 3 days, 10 hours ago
This is sweet in a sad way. Brilliant writing. Very welldone lulu. Wish you the very best.
You are a wonderful writer.
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gooseberry commented on the post, The Basics Are 3 days, 23 hours ago
Seun, this your story is good o but the end is somehow. You have all they required in your story which I think is very cool. The punch others are complaining that is missing has to do with the end I guess.
Very […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, Sunshine 4 days, 2 hours ago
Ok. I had in mind to say that the story woulda been better with only fiyin but others have said it but I’ll still say this…
Fiyin died but many things happened while she was alive. you didn’t go deep into […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, Strange Love 4 days, 4 hours ago
I like this one. Its good. Best wishes.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Spicy Soul Food 4 days, 6 hours ago
Hmmm. Which mum let’s her under 18 year old son spend the night in ada’s house?? Abi was he really a big boy?…. Then he gives her a ring, hope its not key holder ring o cos I wonder where the money came […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, Deep from Within 4 days, 8 hours ago
I think the story is cool although, I expected small cata cata before the makeup sex.
Wish you the best.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Stupid in love 4 days, 9 hours ago
The message was neatly passed but the delivery was somehow. I mean the telling and all that has to do with packaging.
wish you the best.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Re-union Confession 4 days, 12 hours ago
To tell you the truth, this is a competition and I’ll do you no good by trying to be nice… I really didn’t finish the story. I couldn’t. You should have given someone to help you edit since its a […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, Uloma Makes Her Move 4 days, 12 hours ago
I think this story is good. Really good.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Before the Wedding Night 4 days, 13 hours ago
This needs editing o. I saw a couple of typos… And you are a guy. No wonder the soul in the story was missing. Woulda been better if the guy was the mc.
Good job anyway..
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gooseberry commented on the post, Love Is Like An Opioid 5 days ago
This was too long. Better stop her o. Erm, is that a fictional drug? Never heard of it before. Your story is good even though the length made me dizzy a lil.
Well done.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Sweet As A Rose. 5 days ago
Scopeman, you have done justice to this. I felt like I was watching it on a screen while I read. The sex was not soo ‘adult’ yet, very romantic. You have my support.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Virus 5 days, 9 hours ago
The poem long o,*phew*. Nice message.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Orgasms And Regrets 5 days, 11 hours ago
The rhymes are good. As for the poem, I’m confused.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Lover’s ball – Part I 6 days, 10 hours ago
The guy don die for girl wey no even tell am her name. So funny.
I like the rhymes but as seun said, it would have been better as a story. Still good anyway.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Kill Me Before I Die* 6 days, 10 hours ago
Lol. Why you come leave me high and dry, you this man eh. I was expecting some really rugged thriller and you come carry this joke wey I don see before… I don vex.
Its cool sha. You are soo good at creating […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, Abiku, A Cackle For Your Cries 6 days, 12 hours ago
@sibbylwhyte, which browser are you using?? It appears perfect on my phone. Those lines aren’t together on my phone. I noticed that there’s a difference between my phones browser and opera mini. The arrangement […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, The Streetwalker 6 days, 13 hours ago
CHAI!!! I salute. This isn’t scary while reading, its scary after reading. I don’t blame the guys sha… Taking advice from an untrusted, unserious looking policeman who they’ve never seen before…
I wonder […]
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gooseberry commented on the post, Bottles in the Waves 1 week ago
I specially love the tittle. I like the feelings in the poem.. Where have you been?? Good to have you back.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Voodoo Child 1 week ago
Cool poem. I like it.
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gooseberry commented on the post, Voodoo Child 1 week ago
Huh???? There’s nothing wrong with the imagery and it is well edited except for the use of small letters in the beginning of each line…
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gooseberry commented on the post, It Wasn’t That Her Oranges Were Sweetest 1 week ago
I like your poem jare. Poetry doesn’t have to be long to be poetry afterall, haiku poems are good too and they are super short…
Well done.
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gooseberry commented on the post, It Wasn’t That Her Oranges Were Sweetest 1 week ago
Shallow minded ones!?!?! Like any of your lengthy poems is better than this.
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