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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, The Death Of Nithya 3 years ago
good story, good premises. It was bogged down though by grammatical errors. You should read your own work a lot of times and nitpick it down to the bare bones. A good story will tell itself. Also, try and use […]
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, How the other side lives 3 years ago
@dekaiser, thanks.
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, In Your Hands 3 years ago
Indeed, the children’s futures are in their hands. Great job, great message. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Finding A Reason 3 years ago
Good job, loved it. Wondered initially though why they had come to this particular doctor when he was averse to abortions.
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, How the other side lives 3 years ago
@namdi, thanks. Happy you enjoyed it
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, How the other side lives 3 years ago
@chijy, thanks. Good to be back. Thanks for the invite, lol
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Woman On Fire! 3 years, 1 month ago
Good job. It’s true women have never had i easy, but indeed a woman on fire can stand up for herself and do what makes her happy
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Let There Be Light 3 years, 8 months ago
Very good. A loving family is all the fans you need. Enjoyed this
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Things That Leave Scars 3 years, 8 months ago
This is a beautiful rendition of what leaves scars, physical and emotional. Read almost like poetry in some places.
You however need to be careful with shift tenses. You mixed both the present and past tense.
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, The Little Storyteller 2 3 years, 10 months ago
good job highlighting the internal agonies of a child longing for an absent parent.
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Someone Better Than You 3 years, 10 months ago
Clean, crisp good work. As @ojestar said, never be enslaved in your relationship. If it’s not working, get out.
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Dear Marriage 3 years, 10 months ago
Marriage is beautiful, but only if you find the right (And I say right, not perfect) person. I celebrated 10 years of marriage this year, and am excited to spend the next 70 or 80 years of my life with my husband. […]
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Reply to “The Note” 3 years, 10 months ago
A fitting reply to “The Note”. In my opinion, suicide is cowardly, and it leaves behind more victims, as the ones left behind will always wonder why.
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, The Rape Of Innocence 4 years ago
Indeed, time strips us of all innocence. I look back at those days of childhood with nostalgia
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Her Death! 4 years, 1 month ago
@praize, I admit that I tend to see things only in black and white, and my marriage is one of those things I see like that. I am blessed to be married to my best friend, and I will forever be grateful. But that […]
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Folakemi Emem-Akpan commented on the post, Hope, Born Anew (II) 4 years, 1 month ago
@musite, oh, totally get it now. Hahaha
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