@mimiadebayo, ok…that’s the word I would use to describe this- ok. As a writer, you want to strive for the wows and awesome.
also which is it? Odeniran or Adeniran? ‘cos you used Odeniran in two places but […]
ok i admit that Ossy is being an ass (an understatement) but how can Gloria think that an affair with Oyin will be a solution- really stupid and selfish!!
4th paragraph..I think you meant @ “light” beatings not “lightly”
As always, you didn’t disappoint :)
Although i was against her marrying Yomi, i am quite irritated at Gloria and Ossy, especially at Gloria who is supposed to be Oyin’s friend. if she had any concerns about her […]
@circlesoflove,, i like the direction of the story…however you have to watch out for certain errors and structure your sentences appropriately. the beginning was good but it seemed like you struggled in the […]