@febidel, you chose your diction carefully, why seek pardon for what you rather not change? Anyways, like I said earlier, I get your drift…

@MissAjiboye, yes, imagination…

Thanks @lordkel

I’m afraid, after eating this much beans, the after effect could be quite crazy and pongy. Eze I de fear for u… U know @Walter, as I de look u so, u fit be this Eze o, lol ! Next…

Okay, I smell something nice cooking, @scopeman60 better don’t keep us salivating for long bro… Nice!

“BLINDS”

Beautiful poetry, with an endearing flow and passion. The message is true. well done @Shally-Ashimi

@sambrightomo, beautiful, beautiful piece, does read like a love tribute actually. As an appeasement offering, it sure is irresistible. It’s just too beautiful to be only an appeasement offering, if I this were to […]

@ugoquix, yea thanks u got the point noted, it’s a truth and we should speak up as much as we can against the idea of rewarding foreigners for terrorizing us…

@elovepoetry, thanks…

@Glistining thanks

Was he actually the NSCDC P.R.O? Truth is, the fact that the man doesn’t know the website is definitely not enough reason to judge him as incompetent, except of course he is the P.R.O. It is sometimes better that […]

Good, good, good, I like this. Well done @serahsadeiyare, encore!

Okay nice going, I agree with @mimiadebayo

A little bit of telling what exactly made her change her mind, to acknowledging her faults, would have been nice. In the past she never saw her errs, she never thought she was wrong.

Nice one though, good work!

@topazo, that’s the deceit of confidence. Okoromadu blood must be boiling hot o @raptuteisforme, now this is one action packed story. Now this line: “A whimper from his wife,” appears to be wandering lonely […]

…a point in sequence, not all the way attractive, but a necessary part of the sequence. You got my attention still, sire…

You just won’t stop the suspense abi? Nice one…

Nice one. @elovepoetry u write gud. Check “My attempts at starting a conversation were futile as Celestine was intend on taking me…” “intend” shd be “intent” I guess…

Well you have mine, surely.

thanks @chimzorom

It’s not fair so you planned to leave us hanging all along. This is premeditated torture! Nice writing indeed… Good luck on your novel

Next one please…

Good one, you still got lots up your sleeve, interesting twist, this one, well done.

lol @Theo, indeed!

@serahsadeiyare, interesting. The dialogue made the reading somewhat difficult. There are ways to make each character’s statement obvious without using the normal “he said,” “she said,” identification, which I […]

hahahaha, okay o, of course everyone loves to earn…