Mmm, an amusing fart story, an interesting Ness’ pickle and a good narration, @Levuz.
But are you saying that all these Ness’ dilemma that even ended with a 40k reward was just literally a day dream?

Hmm, @toludaniel: What was actually making the character pant furiously as his heart started pounding heavily? He has not even penetrated into her; he was only “feasting on one of her luscious and delicious […]

A Cool and an interesting story, @dkny111. I enjoyed it.

Although there were a few typos, the main thing I found hard to believe was Kelechi’s false accusation. If Kelechi could fall inlove with a white […]

Hmm, @toludaniel: I didnt see much from this story otherthan a prolonged quarrel. Also, your dialogue needs to improve. There were many typos around the dialogues.

Hmm, @kwiksie, this story kinda generates a mixture of an interesting and weird feeling. The persona, Jamal, seemed like a brainac while Julius, a weirdo and you the storyteller — comments reserved.

Well, i […]

Quite Interesting…

Nice story… @Iyandasdiary

Hmm, the romance-esque drama continues…Nice Part 2, @ufuomaotebele.

Work on your dialogues; it needs improvement. Most dialogues start on a fresh line, although there’re exceptions.

Interesting story @ufuomaotebele. Yeah, it happens. Sometimes, people think they have put it all together, only to later discover mistakes here and there.
Nice story…Keep it up!

Interesting inspirational story @topazo. Happy New Year to you too.

However, I’ve read this story before on facebook, it’s just that you changed the details. Anyway, it’s all good. Keep it up.

I think this is becoming too length just on an issue of selling mangoes and the experience encountered. At first, I liked it, but now, you’re giving away too much details.

Interesting story and well written.

Thanks @stephethel, @Nalongo, @bunmiril, @sibbylwhyte, and @TolaO for your comments.

Well, @TolaO, sorry if it felt that way. Perhaps, you didnt decipher the whole arrangement of the story. It’s just a nightmare […]