I like this. And I think I like this guy.

Nice.

A triumph.

@Theo, It is neither a shot at Roman Catholic or the Blessed Virgin Mary but at individuals who join the Church for personal interests, blindly, and utterly confused.

And I am not sniggering at the ‘Mother of […]

The plethora of styles you have used are wonderful, shows you thought through this poem. Nice one.

Nice.

@ameenaedrees, thank you for your reading and commenting. It is such a sad state of our religions that people just get into them without interrogating the teachings, and that’s my message.

You won’t believe […]

Thank you @Chime221, you mean you are still underage?

Nice story, relatable.

Nice.

Classic seduction story…

Some language issues. Sounds like direct vernacular translation like …gotten STD. The right word for this I think should have been … contracted STD?

Nice story though.

Come on @luwizdrizzy, let it out. What sort of stupid things?

Thank you for your comment, and reading.

@praize, I get my inspiration to write this way from the life around me, the need to revoke vices while at the same time entertaining. I am not a serious literature person, and in the court of them serious […]

@Folakemi, you are right. There is always a choice, but do we really have it. Since we are born we are taught how to live, in the end our lives become what has been handed down to us over the years.

@Roy-journals thank you for your reading, and comment.

@mcsnol, @gmoney… Thank you for reading. Perpetual bondage in self-denial of God ordered practices and ordained rituals like sex are one’s choice catalyst being the all time religious tirade and indoctrination. […]

Nice.