@elovepoetry @khadijahmuhammad Thanks for your comments. It’s really been a long time since I last came online, buh it’s good to be here. It’s good to have you here. It’s good to know you have read my book. I’ve […]

@elovepoetry @k hadijahmuhammad Thanks for your comments. It’s really been a long time since I last came online, buh it’s good to be here. It’s good to have you here. It’s good to know you have read my book. I’ve […]

Good effort. But the thoughts are not as coordinated as they’re meant to be. “I need someone….I’ve found someone.” Hmmmm. It slacks.
I’ve found someone
Who wears my love proudly
Like her exquisite garment of […]

Hahaha @Hymar please don’t report me to him. Please. Ejor, boko nu, s’l vous plait. I don’t. Him to quench my career in literary criticism. But yes, this work is great.

May the gods that gave you the farmland, and gave you the hoes and strength to till it, continue to water it for you. This is one of the best works I’ve read on NS. I’ll recommend this work for the Nigerian Prize […]

@Hymer, if I tell you this work is good, take it from me: this is what art should be. Bravo, brother. Help me tell them. Nice use of symbols, images, imageries,metaphors…the voice is clear and with resounding […]

Hmmmm. I guess I’ll be very careful with words here. I should be. To play:
1. I love the theme you are trying to develop. It is very evident you have a burning passion for poetic arts…especially,…
2. I love […]

Thanks for this @sibbylwhyte I’ve effected the change. “Your suggestion rocks” too. Thanks a lot.

Thanks for reading, and commenting. I appreciate. But I really would love to be “flogged” a little. Who’ll spot out errors in it to help me improve? Pls critic.

Ok, now, to get started I must say that what you have here is a good art. It would have been very easy for me to come here and say “Good poem”, and hit the comment key. But, no, I must tell you what I like and […]

Yeahh, good work playing with words; but exactly what theme are we up to here?

@Praize, @sambrightomo, @nocolebassey, @josephoguche Thanks. I’m glad y’all find this to be good.

1. @sibbylwhyte touched on the ellipsis. Hmmm, she got here before me. Ok, I was wondering if they were there to add meanings to the art. A full stop would’ve the same homage as what I read here.
2. The poem […]

Wow. I’ve out of network coverage and haven’t been able to respond to your comments, but today I’m here, and I must say I’m happy with all your criticisms and commendations. This is actually my first prose. I’ve […]