great story @ojestar was a bit confused at first until halfway through before i could understand the plot and story line. Nice work.

Great story line @levuz this is good

That’s just sad and humiliating!

Nicely interwoven. Well done

Awww! I love the way you portrayed Vera’s character. This is beautiful.

beautiful…

@misstayo I love this piece simply because it spoke volumes to me. Good work!

Keep it up.

Nice write up.

I’m with @ojestar on this one

@theo this is a master piece. I love this! Nice story line and plot.

But wait…. does it mean that Leona didn’t win the case? I enjoyed the read and learnt some new judicial terms as I’m not even a lawyer or anything close to it… @maggiesmart

@afronuts thanks a lot for reading and correcting. Correction noted.

It also looks like you were trying to summarize the whole story. Just let the words flow. Even if it’s longer than the required length, you can always break it into parts until you finish. Well done.

@durodolu-john-adewale nice write up minus the few hiccups here and there. Keep writing.

@kyceeq I think it’s just a coincidence because I had the same thoughts. I had already read the first accident story while mine was already Scheduled on queue and there was nothing else I could do. Thanks for reading.

@dekaiser This is very much on point! I also support the notion of most parents not allowing their kids watch certain movies or home videos meant for adults until they turn 14/15, and even at that the parents […]

@erimzy Wow!! This is very thought-provoking….. I still vivdly remember the road leading to Enugu city from 9th mile; so badly messed up with pot holes and speed breakers as at the last time I was in Enugu. I […]

This is a deep one, lol. Very very deep.
Keep writing.