What does this mean:
“You’ve always observed it with so much gaze ”
To observe and to gaze, aren’t they same?
Ambiguous,don’t you think or is it a motivated repetition?
“You’ve always observed it wit […]
I kept reading that “in my mind set” as “in my mind”. I felt it would read better that way! But what do I know?
Hmm, I am wondering why there are no fullstops in your poem! Do you write all your poems like that? […]
Your poem affirms something very important: life from the ground.
It made me reflect on the fact that the food we eat comes from the ground too. And the persona had to “go into the ground and take root” to be […]
Wow! This is a poem deep and rich in meaning. I appreciate this. Celebrating life in the womb and the strength of the one who borne it. Noeline.
These lines :
“Till a husk flew into her cage
Broke all bars […]
Wow! I can imagine this flowing out of you like it’s some broken pipe. Take heart please.
A good poem with the the ending of one line beginning the next. I doubt though if putting your “heart in a locker” would […]
Me thought you was a gentleman! Don’t no lady come on all fours and you not help her to a seat first?! I be a gentleman or else imma dismember your six-letter name! Hehehe just messing with you.
I enjoyed […]
I so greatly value your pointers. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Your question has made me revisit the poem again,although what I presently have is different from what is posted here. I am constantly on a review […]