Thanks. Senorita’s tale is a story told by the character and all her actions are in the past. ‘The idea behind this story is the fact that Senorita is a clueless village girl who hasn’t seen city life before’.

Yes, I was trying to describe his swift change from pidgin to English. Thanks

Okay, I definitely will. Thanks.

Thank you all for your comments. @TolaO and Kingobozy, thank you for the corrections, I’ll work on them.

Nice flow, but it sounded like the main character was the narrator at first then it became the girl and finally the narrator. I love this piece and I hope it’s a series.

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I love your writing. Nice. But is this a true story?

Awww thanks Ajenifula Adetokunbo.

Thank you Blackgold. I’m sure he pays her well enough.

Thanks Kingobozy for the comment.

Thank you Myne

Inspiring and real too. It got me thinking of those same dreams and wondering whether they were ever meant to come true. Thumbs up!

Nice one but do Muslims bear Jake? Which actually is a short version of Jacob. I have never seen a Muslim bearing an English name, correct me if i am wrong.

Thank you so much.