this is true but i don’t like the flippant way you handled the issue; as if the lives didn’t matter to you. anyway you are a Nigerian.

good one! i like this line “In bed with the clouds”.

lol it is not in my blog yet. it is still being worked on. thank you all the same

sorry i dont get that. “have a synopsis”? no be expo be that?

thank you @francis this is exactly what I want. I feel human when corrected. I will sure look at all these you mentioned. “…saw a vision for me…” might not sound grammatically alluring but the idea here is to […]

thanks for reading through. sure more are coming!

thank you @Myne. i going to do an overhauling now before i come with the rest of the story.

oh my! thank you @Daniel Okoli, I want to see more of the typos exposes. this one of the evils MS word is doing to me. i don’t know spellings again. I just misspell and right click and select. my bad!

na wao! i just cant say a thing yet till i am sure i am not like Ephraim.
very descriptive!
it made me feel like i am watching porn and switching from disgust to like.

writing for children could be fun I think. I’ve never thought of it.

@Zikora thank you so much. i will like to see your male version, though i have the male version already. i will post it soon. thank you for the correction

ok keep writing pal, we are all work in progress

@ostar i have always known you to be a wonderful poet. that’s great I will need a copy dear.

I get the sense of the poem but I don’t really like the inversions. they seem forced. For example i wondered why you say “I had a girl and I could not her keep.” and not “I had a girl and I could not keep her” […]

@Gozzygoz thank you so much. this exactly what i want.

i will send now!!

i am glad you like it!

@jaywriter thank you for stopping by

@nicolebassey i think i would like you to show some of the needed slashing and polishing please

@olan if you copy just acknowledge me. please go ahead and criticise cos u don’t need to know how to drive before you do mechanic. at least you can see errors in grammar. however we are all work in progress here. […]

@whiteman thank you

@Daireen thank you for stopping by

i dont know what to say because i know this kind of thing can only happen in the north

fine! that just what i choose to say.

wow this is cool! where have I been? well congratulation to those that made it from here!

i am still trying to find something poetic about this. ok ‘pour hearts into laps’. that’s one expression i like. ok i will read again.

i like this i must say. ndewo