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chemokopi and
Chu'diebere Ajala are now friends 5 years, 8 months ago
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Struggling with the Pen 5 years, 10 months ago
@Chemokopi this is written from the heart and it has every quality of a good poem. I salute you for knitting the stanzas and making us imbibe the mood of the persona.
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Musings of a Single girl 5 years, 10 months ago
@Eunice perhaps you need to consider the way you carry yourself, the friends you move around with, even the way you roll your balls so to say.
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, The Runner 5 years, 10 months ago
*There are*
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, The Runner 5 years, 10 months ago
@Kwiksie you have a good story here.
The only problem is that you were already licking your fingers before we could get to taste the soup.
Please take note of all said above.
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Singing Your Beauty 5 years, 10 months ago
@O-Money this is like a soft spoken word which oils the heart and soothes the soul.
I am glad that you recognised the power of your poetic licence…and switching your stance from passive to active and back […]
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Saying something to an Ex- 5 years, 10 months ago
Good concept.
But to me this is more like a soliloquy than a poem. Some lines are poetic no doubt, but they are a way too scattered. You can rearrange the enjambment (run-on-lines) and reconsider your choice of […] -
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Body Contact (2) 5 years, 10 months ago
@Amy78 you finally killed it.
Nice work.
You were more purposeful in this part. And I like the ending too. You actually left me with something to mull over. I have a feeling you like moving things around. […] -
Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Yesterday's Scar 5 years, 10 months ago
I can’t help it but to laugh out loud. You nearly got me going. I thought you were making the mistake of killing the story from the very first paragraph.
Nice one.Note that I agree with @funpen. THE STORY […]
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Africa wails 5 years, 10 months ago
@Ajenifuja-Adetokunbo you’ve done a good job delivering this. I like the way you used simile & imagery to cover the less poetic lines.
But there are few points I don’t quite agree with you. You said, ” …yet […] -
Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Next To You 5 years, 10 months ago
I like this poem…beautiful run on lines.
Bursting with joy unbridled
l love this line. It’s very poetic.
Thanks and keep it up.
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, Body Contact (1) 5 years, 10 months ago
I read through this story but I didn’t get the ‘catch’ that could make me wait for the second part. Apart from the typographical errors, there’s something awkward in the way you told this story.
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, INCANTATION TO WARD OFF PREY (Traditional: from the Esan) 6 years, 4 months ago
Remind me of Chinua Achebe’s famous ‘Things Fall Apart’, Ola Rotimi’s ‘gods are not to blame’….and the passionate ‘ovar… nogbisi
Good work.
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Chu'diebere Ajala commented on the post, The Wife Diaries V 6 years, 8 months ago
This piece is interesting….though I just started reading
I guess I will have to pick the previous four to get the whole ‘gist’ in the bagThanks
my review comes later
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