@Chemokopi this is written from the heart and it has every quality of a good poem. I salute you for knitting the stanzas and making us imbibe the mood of the persona.
I was hurt by the 3rd stanza, but however it […]

@Eunice perhaps you need to consider the way you carry yourself, the friends you move around with, even the way you roll your balls so to say.
Sweet nothings sometimes is a reaction to the impression a lady […]

*There are*

@Kwiksie you have a good story here.
The only problem is that you were already licking your fingers before we could get to taste the soup.
Please take note of all said above.
The are little details that cannot […]

@O-Money this is like a soft spoken word which oils the heart and soothes the soul.

I am glad that you recognised the power of your poetic licence…and switching your stance from passive to active and back […]

Good concept.
But to me this is more like a soliloquy than a poem. Some lines are poetic no doubt, but they are a way too scattered. You can rearrange the enjambment (run-on-lines) and reconsider your choice of […]

@Amy78 you finally killed it.
Nice work.
You were more purposeful in this part. And I like the ending too. You actually left me with something to mull over. I have a feeling you like moving things around. […]

I can’t help it but to laugh out loud. You nearly got me going. I thought you were making the mistake of killing the story from the very first paragraph.
Nice one.

Note that I agree with @funpen. THE STORY […]

@Ajenifuja-Adetokunbo you’ve done a good job delivering this. I like the way you used simile & imagery to cover the less poetic lines.
But there are few points I don’t quite agree with you. You said, ” …yet […]

I like this poem…beautiful run on lines.

Bursting with joy unbridled

l love this line. It’s very poetic.
Thanks and keep it up.
Nice one

I read through this story but I didn’t get the ‘catch’ that could make me wait for the second part. Apart from the typographical errors, there’s something awkward in the way you told this story.
For instance […]

Remind me of Chinua Achebe’s famous ‘Things Fall Apart’, Ola Rotimi’s ‘gods are not to blame’….and the passionate ‘ovar… nogbisi

Good work.
I hope you won’t be deterred by seeing that you stand alone. […]

This piece is interesting….though I just started reading
I guess I will have to pick the previous four to get the whole ‘gist’ in the bag

Thanks

my review comes later