lost me a bit, i feel no melody to these words, you try.

i see your are lost in a moment, sorry? are always lost in these moments, happens to me sometimes

sounds to me so real, nice try, since u could actually capture everything happenning around, nice paid attention.

it is not like that o! i’m just just getting to understand this point things, sorry o!

nice poem, the imagery is good but not well painted to me o!, i could dicipher your location, i be like say them post you go villa,

very funny poem i laughed as i read the lines, one should also realize and embrace that we are in the age of information and technology, all these a passing fad, lets see what come next, maybe dem fit turn our hands to bb.

i connected to your words, they were intense and i could feel them really that it came from within, and the second poem was simple, understandable and sort, good imagery, correct dictions and consistent rhyming…. salutem

thank you!

bees keep working for honey all their lives, and that do you know that honey is the only natural food that is made without destroying any kind of life. so it’s more of a food for thought- realization.
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kaycee, thanks wells.

thank you very much

thanks.

how so complex is this.

i was just experimenting o!

thank you for your much enlightened comment, some poets are not english teachers but inspired writers. how we interprete the quiet voice varies.