@innoalifa: You are too kind!

Thanks @innoalifa and @dkny111. Mee, I understand your misgivings about poetry. In many ways, it can be said that I do not like poetry, too. :)

@innoalifa: thanks for reading!
@dkny111: hehehe…this brings memories, you know. Written two years ago at the height of my sojourn in experimentation. Now, I see better. Thanks for reading, man. *na you be oga o…lol.

hehe..nice.

This will need close reading. But I see the careful construction gone into it. I think that the direct title negates analogizing with ants. I guess that’s what breeds the confusion.

Well done. Keep improving your art.

@chudiebere, thanks for your kind words! I am happy you took something from the poem.

I am happy the past editions were won by naija stories members. Let’s hope that repeats itself this year.

Good luck to all who wish to enter!

@Myne: Thank you!

Thanks @kaycee!

@Babalolaibisola: Amen, brother…amen. You know I always value your comments. Thank you.

@Babalolaibisola: Amen, brother…amen. You know I always value your comments. Thank you.

@six, I don’t know o. Ha!

Frightening images here, Emmanuel. Good poem.

Keep improving your art.

Beautiful, clear writing. I like how easy your choice of words and sentence construction helped to make the story very vivid.

You have heard those before me. For many, beautiful writing wouldn’t blind their […]

Interesting as usual.

I did think though that Desola matured too fast. I mean, the way she was advising Richard–it didn’t seem like the naive Desola I have come to know (you got in the way of the character? […]

Interesting as usual.

I did think though that Desola matured too fast. I mean, the way she was advising Richard–it didn’t seem like the naive Desola I have come to know (you got in the way of the character? […]

Hmmmm…nice one @topazo

hehehe…hmmm..ok o..I see you @mimiadebayo, the really angry reader. Hehehe…