Lol!

It does feel like a short story, instead of a longer piece. And i really like Chidinma. Say what you want, but i’m down for that kind of girl. You should finish this.

This is the kind of poetry you read with an eye closed- its safe, too subtle and generalised.

Oh, this is to recover my losses. No offense.

I can’t believe i actually paid 10pt for this… But it was a bold attempt. Anyway, u owe me a ten.

I like that. The concept of ‘love’ and ‘mercy’ thriumphing. Nice work

Carefully thought out. Very classy and sweetly paced. Trust me, this is very pleasing peotry- something that Alan Harris would write!

This is as biblical as it is straight forward. I enjoyed it. What struck me, beside the moral message, was the way you asserted those ‘rights.’ Well done.

Nice one. However, I am one of those do-it-yourself, Independent girls, that expects nothing from a guy. This piece was certainly perfect to pass the time.

Well said. In fact it couldn’t have been said any better. I wish more girls would think like this, instead of making ‘husbands’ a priority even in a university. Ladies are we scared of becoming the president one […]

Simple, elegant, and straight to the point. I didn’t see a lot of grammatical errors like @thaprince said, and it didn’t get in the way of the story.

Basically, reading and writing is what kicks every writer’s engine into action, no matter how imaginative we are (or think we are.) I cannot stress that the structure for any piece of writing doesn’t come easy. It […]

Now that’s how Judges make a contest worth the while for the contestants! @praize I never had a problem with the winners, I have actually read the stories; I just felt that the Judges owed the contestant more. I […]

Wait a minute… There are typos, bad punctuation, and all the “JUDGES” came up with this bizarre review? Has the admin account been hacked? What’s going on here?

Very easy to read, especially on a slow Saturday like this! Good job hon.

What sort of review is this? The story was told from only one point of view- and what is wrong with a writer choosing to be ominiscient? The story was an easy read.
SMH

What sort of review is this? The story was told from only one point of view- and what is wrong with a writer choosing to be ominiscient? The story was an easy read.

I appreciate your view. I believe I was heading for something new with the story.

Thank you for commenting. I was beginning to feel as if I missed something.

this is epic and hilarious!