I braced myself for the scream I knew was coming. I heard the gate squeak when the maid came in, as she did every morning. My immediate concern now was how to act surprised, pretend the reason for her scream was […]
Well done, works for me.
I suspected he was gay by the 3rd paragraph so the end didn’t really hit me as you may have wanted.
Also, in the 1st paragraph, I think you meant ripped, not ribbed.
Keep writing, […]