@Lade…totally concur with you. If the preacher had not fallen, Ild have been disappointed. It would have made the story predictable. It seems to me he actually travelled all the way so he could ‘fall’ again Good story. I read the second part before the first one so I kinda know how it ends [...]

Good story and well told. I like the way you ‘skipped’ two years at the end. I do feel the dialogue was a bit long though but I guess it was necessary to have a background of Gloria’s past…overall, well done

Great speech by Sanusi. Thanks Yejide for posting. I have always said that only mentally lazy or greedy Nigerians will keep asking that we be divided into units without addressing the basic issues – food, shelter, clothing and if I may add, proper education. Sanusi forgot to include that a few years ago, the Modakekes [...]

Guy!! Sequel pls!!!

Thanks empress sewande….We just need to keep hope alive

Not sure I get the end part well but well written story overall. Some spelling errors here and there – nothing proper re-reading won’t solve

Straight to the point message

How can anyone write this good???? And the ending’s the best I’ve seen in a long time. I can’t even suggest a way to make it better!!

Truth be told and without any apologies, WE africans are mentally lazy. I am not oblivious of the fact that a few actually think out of the box and do great things but generally, our culture and traditions are programmed to make us mentally lazy. How else would you explain killling of twins in the [...]

nice work..no need for the ‘subtitles’..no be TV we dey watch. The obsene words could also have been better put…e.g. f**k rather than totally spelt out.

I don’t know if it was intentional but the end seemed somehow…nice story all the same

Nice one…..more! more!

Nice story and well told. To add to the ‘gay’ controversy, though I am no doc but from my small biology, I know that both males and females are born with hormones of the opposite gender so males have little amount of the female hormones and vice versa. However, some individuals have what they call [...]

It was the late Pastor Bimbo Odukoya who once gave a scenario when some boys said they couldn’t control themselves whenever a girl gets naked in front of them. She asked what would the guys do if a girl gets stark naked, ready for the thing and the guy too ready and all and then [...]

Something’s missing from the story. Without trying to sound like Nana of ‘West African Idols’ 2007 version, ‘ I didn’t feel’ the story…:D

Simple and nice is all I can say…keep it up

Good story and also well written…

I already misfired on my first reply to neo-lite’s question on this issue. Guess I need to brush up my Bible knowledge. Could u please let me know where this is in the Bible?

Not sure dere’s such a story in the Bible

Good ending…ddnt see it coming this way. I did not get to read parts 2 and 3 though. Couldn’t seem to locate them.

Good all the same…Nice one man

Im sure they will include the dislike button soon.
Good letter. Now print it and take it to the nearest general post office. N10 stamp should get it to Zuckerberg

hmmmmm

Good start…let’s see how this goes

nice story and well written too but where’s the rest of it?

Or something in those lines

Beautiful story…nice ending. I would have prefered it ended this way though: Our friendship might have started the day I had a flat tyre and she showed me how to change it. It might have been the day when, after a heavy downpour kept her at her uncle’s place, her daughters sat in my apartment [...]