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ayistar commented on the post, Marine Spirit 5 days, 17 hours ago

Come mek I wipe you kpako
ayistar commented on the post, Mommy’s Gone Again 2 months, 3 weeks ago

She’s gone in search of feeds.

Good work
ayistar commented on the post, Make a Wish Shun the Witch 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Nice poem. Oga @topazo has done well
ayistar commented on the post, D I A M O N D S 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Clever use of words… Beautiful poem, keep it up
ayistar commented on the post, Will Matters 2 months, 3 weeks ago

Wise man Sir Chemo… It takes great wisdom to write a poem like this.

I like the 2nd and 3rd verses.. The use of ‘red oil’ is clever and the proverbs are superb… Thank you for inviting me Sir..

*Dat […]
ayistar and Princess Arah are now friends 2 months, 4 weeks ago
ayistar commented on the post, The Lazy Jazz 3 months ago

Oga @excellency thank you for reading
ayistar commented on the post, The Lazy Jazz 3 months ago

I learn from you guys Sir @chemokopi, thanks!
ayistar commented on the post, The Day Of Reckoning 3 months, 1 week ago

Very good use of words. Clever write

stay inspired!
ayistar commented on the post, The Lazy Jazz 3 months, 1 week ago

I’m glad Sir @ostar, thank you very much. I pray also you wax great…….. Fly high Sir
ayistar commented on the post, The Lazy Jazz 3 months, 1 week ago

I thank you for your comment @kaycee.

A shiftless person is lazy (and idle). He has no ambition. What I mean in the last verse is that an idle mind is the devil’s workshop…… Mischief is the work of idle hands
ayistar commented on the post, February Featured Writer Topazo – I Write as I’m Inspired 3 months, 1 week ago

I hail thee Sir @topazo, Guy you’ve achieved a great thing!

Let your fire keep burning to bless…
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ayistar commented on the post, The Lazy Jazz 3 months, 1 week ago

I invite you to read my poem Sirs:
@ostar,
@kaycee
@chemokopi

Thanks!
ayistar commented on the post, The Lazy Jazz 3 months, 1 week ago

Thank you for appreciating my work @basittjamiu
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ayistar commented on the post, The Chicken and the Belly -Two Poems 3 months, 1 week ago

Well done Sir,
soaking garri, I hear it’s now called ‘Cassa-Flakes’ (Cassava Flakes) by the University students…

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ayistar commented on the post, Quail 3 months, 1 week ago

I didn’t know, but now I do…

Good work, stay inspired
ayistar commented on the post, There Is No Love Without Sacrifice 3 months, 1 week ago

Well done Sir

Line 2:

/when fallen in love without
enemy/
can be written as:

/when in love without
enemy/
for economy.

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ayistar wrote a new post, The Lazy Jazz 3 months, 2 weeks ago

The sleep of a laboring man is
sweet,
But a lazy man’s slumber is his greatest feat.

It irks a lazy man when early
birds chirp;
For he loves not to discontinue his sleep:

Instead of getting up to fetch […]
ayistar commented on the post, The Key 3 months, 2 weeks ago

Well done Poet,
Keep improving the blank page.
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ayistar commented on the post, Oozen Gold 3 months, 2 weeks ago

God will

nice poem
ayistar commented on the post, Three Poems 3 months, 3 weeks ago

The second poem I like,
Stay inspired sir
ayistar commented on the post, In Limbo 4 months, 1 week ago

Good words, clever write…

Fly higher
ayistar commented on the post, Nigeria still believing 4 months, 1 week ago

Good job, Nigeria still believing

Stay inspired.
ayistar commented on the post, When the World Says No 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Well done Poet, wholesome indeed.
I like the flow..

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ayistar commented on the post, Bereaved 4 months, 2 weeks ago

@chemokopi yeah I believe also that colons can be used of the dashes… in this case.

Much gracias Sir,

Fly high!
ayistar commented on the post, Bereaved 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Hullo Sir @chemokopi I need also your verdict on this
ayistar commented on the post, Spoken Letters 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Way to go!
You are very clever with written letters.

keep it up!
ayistar posted an update 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Scribe, hope no Pharisee?
ayistar commented on the post, Heartwail 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Good write
stay inspired!
ayistar commented on the post, I’ve Not Seen 4 months, 2 weeks ago

Beautiful… is your poem..
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