I really like this letter format that you used.Plot? beautiful.I like the way it flowed like a “gist” as we can tell that kiki is someone that she’s pretty close to.The end like everyone above me has said,came too […]
I think this is one of the best writeups that I have ever read on Ns.I agree whole heartedly with you and I love that you wrote this from an unbiased point of view.
My friend told me that as a girl her mum used […]
When I was still a little girl, barely 8, I used to be all alone at home because my elder siblings went to boarding schools and my parents left very early and came back late.The only thing to keep me company were […]
I always loved video games. From watching my brothers play PES to being obsessed with GTA and I still love them but I totally agree with you on the negative effects of the games.It all boils down to proper […]
MY THOUGHTS ARE IN CAPITAL LETTERS IN BRACKETS.LET’S DO THIS….Woke up early not to miss the first bus.
Mondays(I DON’T KNOW IF YOU WERE TRYING TO CREATE A DRAMATIC EFFECT.IF YOU ARE,I WOULD SUGGEST THAT YOU […]
My thoughts are in brackets. Doctor! Doctor!!.. (this should be in quotes)Was a female voice
heard in the premises of BRUNNES MEDICAL CENTRE(“a female voice rang in the premises of …..”). Dr. Fregene who was […]
O my God!Paranoid delusions!I feel so sad!Elvis killed Chokwe!What!!!!!!!!!
“I’m beginning to wonder what kind of search for inner peace achievable through the appreciation of nature via a labourious walk, and […]