I can’t appreciate you enough- for having a full grasp and interpretation of these words that flow from the tide and ebb of my mind. @anakadrian. You are a pure critique material and I hope you know that.
@anakadrian My mentor and ‘teacher poet’ (lol) says all poems are masterpieces…’priceless it is-any creativity the mind invents’ ….I do agree with him…that gave me the much needed freedom to express myself […]
It’s a nice start. You painted a picture of an extraordinary beauty with your lines. Thumbs up. But then, just like @anakadrian said, it could pass for a good work of prose without the spacing. In short, it was […]
I wouldn’t call it ‘decent’ like @anakadrian , I would say it’s beautiful…this is a ‘beautiful masterpiece’……wonderful imagery too. I can’t but wonder if you have a sweet mouth in person too…
The first […]