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Tayo commented on the post, Remembering Fela 6 years, 3 months ago
@AlabaOk . I feel you.
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, The Rising Glint Part 3 6 years, 4 months ago
Again, full of interesting detail, @alabaok. I like how you give your white characters an authentic voice.
I didn’t find the end of this story so satisfying. Maybe you shouldn’t have included the first […]
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, The Rising Glint Part 2 6 years, 5 months ago
Very good story, @alabaok. Very brave of you to set your story in the past; it requires a bit more research/work than a modern day one, but you’ve made it work.
I should go and look for part 1.
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Babalola Ibisola VABI commented on the post, Folashade Mi 6 years, 5 months ago
Wow!!!
Many thanks @AlabaOk! I am earnestly waiting for this piece . . .and I will show it to her too. -
Babalola Ibisola VABI commented on the post, Folashade Mi 6 years, 5 months ago
Still @alabaOk, if I may persuade to reinvest that flow into yet more positive expression, may be just for me and my Folashade, wld u oblige us, please.lol
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Babalola Ibisola VABI commented on the post, Folashade Mi 6 years, 5 months ago
Such is life o, the yin and yen, andro and gyno, positive and negative!
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Tola Odejayi commented on the post, Shando Hilton 6 years, 5 months ago
@alabaok, the first half of this read too much like a historical narrative. Maybe it would have been better if you had cut down on this, or interspersed this with the story of the convicts that you told in the […]
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olajumoke omisore commented on the post, The Rising Glint Part 3 6 years, 5 months ago
@AlabaOk, very welldone as usual – from you..
I better go catch the previous parts.
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Bubbllinna commented on the post, Voyeur: In the Light. 6 years, 5 months ago
@alabaOK. I am really glad you liked this… Thanks for reading and commenting. Appreciated. $ß.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals – 11 6 years, 6 months ago
@AlabaOk. Lol. Do I detect that too? Hehehe. Thanks for reading!
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topazo commented on the post, My Worst Memory 6 years, 6 months ago
@alabaOk… thanks for reading
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olajumoke omisore commented on the post, Our Angels 11 6 years, 6 months ago
@AlabaOk, thank you. I am glad you enjoyed the narrative from Eniola’s pov. It needs some work to make it better though.
I am glad you got the bit about Richard. He did walk into it with his eyes wide open. It […]
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khadijahmuhammad commented on the post, Call for Submissions – Cordite Books 6 years, 6 months ago
This is interesting.@alabaok take note.You will make a good spy fiction writer.
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Afronuts commented on the post, Crash 6 years, 7 months ago
Thanks Alaba. Its people like you that actually keep me writing!
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olajumoke omisore commented on the post, Our Angels 9 6 years, 7 months ago
And people usually assume the man is in the wrong. Can you imagine if Richard stays but starts playing away. She will tell the whole word then, lol. Thanks @AlabaOk.
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olajumoke omisore commented on the post, Our Angels 9 6 years, 7 months ago
He is not having much luck, is he @AlabaOk. Thank you dear sir for reading and commenting. Thanks.
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Mimiadebayo commented on the post, Betrayals and Funerals – 6 6 years, 7 months ago
@AlabaOk Really? Hmmm.Nice observation. Thank you for reading and commenting Sir
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topazo commented on the post, Spirituality and Sensualities 6 years, 7 months ago
lol @alabaok well…not really
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olajumoke omisore commented on the post, Our Angels 7 6 years, 7 months ago
@AlabaOk, please tag me when it is ready. Would love to read it. I am sure you will nail it.
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olajumoke omisore commented on the post, Our Angels 7 6 years, 7 months ago
@AlabaOk, am moved that a good writer like you think me worthy enough. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Thank you.
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