“Sweet Mother I no go forget you”, he kept humming, he was going to see his beloved mother after two very long years. He had prepared for this journey. Standing on the platform, he waited eagerly for the train, it […]

@kodeya many thanks

@shadiat Thank you ! Glad you like it

@kaycee thanks, working on the novel, been a bit slow though

Really ? That’s interesting…thanks for commenting

Wow..I wonder why mine didn’t make it. Anyways congrats guys and all the best

Hey @sibbylwhyte !..Good piece I liked it , really, but it would have been great if it was tailored more to the “everyday” theme, the theme is present in the poem , but it is not too explicit. So what happened at […]

lool ! Good one . Should have been battle against time AND stomach..

Thanks

@sontel Thanks a lot

Thanks a lot @kaycee

@ibagere a very good poem , though I feel the way you patronize radio listeners is too harsh !
Your glossary is funny ! Did you come up with all those nicknames ?

Even the baby will understand…lol ! Funny . Well done

The whole nation in a poem , great idea @literati , I really like it. “From Pat’s English to Jona’s speech”..you had to include that didn’t you ?..lol !

Just mah-ve-lous

I thrilled that you rhymed till the end , you rock

“Every single day he is useful..” this line cracked me up , it means she must have seen some other useless daddies before..lol.

You have a bright child.

Very well done Queen. Would have been better if you had broken it into parts or sections for it’s length. Nevertheless, it was a theme everyone could relate too, “never keep your self when you fail” and “passion […]

Tragic end , again I must say I envy your vocabulary , I had to write some down, never heard of the word “consternation” before . Great story , at first I did not want to go through because of its length, but I […]

Good move NS

Good move NS

It is good that you have shed more light on the background of this magazine , especially the fact that the founders are young graduates. With this information, it is more understandable that they request for […]

@enoquin – looool..i’m being sarcastic. Of course I agree with you , there should be some form encouragement , enough of the free labor , even an apprentice has to eat.

@enoquin – for volunteer writers, their reward is in heaven

I don’ get why some people advertise their bbm pin on their facebook walls or profiles , one has to draw boundaries in order to avoid these perverts.

Great Article.

I decided not to renew my bbm subscription this month , and I’m surprised that life is still normal…lol
Great poem, but I wonder why you stopped rhyming after the first three lines ?

Your title “Any Amount” grabs attention, but I feel it took quite long before the reader could understanding the reason for the title. For a short story ,the reason should have been revealed earlier – as you […]

@magic this is magical

I believe in your writing too

It is better to give than to receive , the end reminded me of that quote. Also good character earns you rewards beyond your imagination, as shown in the shopkeeper’s outcome. You have a good command of English […]