this looks exactly like one of my poems! I love the images created of eagle preying on nothing and of a madman going nowhere. Good one. i cant criticize this effectively because it looks like how i write.
To love the wrong
What worser fate than to love the wrong?
To utter words of love and be hit with a prong
A two edged stab to your heart to tear you worlds apart
And cast it’s shadow on the pitiful demise of […]