Wow! Thanks for the free poetry lecture! You are a darling. loved the poem too. Kudos!

Thanks @osakwe, so lovely having you come around, you are so scarce these days…

@Francis Thank you! you are such a charmer.

Thank you @Jadesola We all need to flee greed, your insight is reassuring.

Thank you @sibbylwhyte

Thank you @khadijahmuhammad

Thank you @elovepoetry I have noted the corrections you gave.

Thank you for speaking up against these wicked leaders! I enjoyed this especially the second poem. All the best.

Well done.

perhaps the last line could read — indeed there will never be? I feel you didn’t apply yourself here. Lacks your usual poetic touch.

Oh dear, such a strong start, simple logical middle then this … silly ending??? Why? do bad endings happen to good essays?

Wake up and FIND it’s true. Nice but sounds incomplete heed the words of @ostar our Oga at the top. Well done, we want to read more of your work.

Unimaginitive use of language, lax writing, unwieldy sentences. The phrase ‘democracy has failed Nigeria’ echoes through out this essay like a refrain. Good effort but not enough to blow socks and shoes off.

hmm too verbose, many words little depth, there is a love of words here though. Kudos,

Hmm Mr @Ayomitans you have my applause with this. Great storytelling, crazy twists at each turn, this could have been at least a five part series… patience man. Also watch the adverbs and the unnecessary […]

Very nice, rich imagery, good rhythm, a bit Victorian though. and more of head than heart. There’s talent here, I hope he/she ll keep at the art.

WOW!!! This is fantastic! Exceptional metaphor, some lines hit so hard that I staggered. Chop knuckle!
The title and the writing though… hmmm, see me in camera, if you wish.
The second person narrative would […]

Nice lines, @topazo i wish you went deeper with your emotions, this sounds cerebral, give me a little grit and blood . A few words seemed superflous. That in Stanza one , Every in stanza two,… tighten this a […]

I am still laughing @ayomitan, testify indeed. Well written and engaging.

Well, great idea, great concept but less than stellar writing. Needs editing and rewriting. Was this a first draft? Well done. Thanks for sharing.