I like the way you began this true-life narrative…it caught my attention and made me want to proceed further. This is what I feel any writing should attempt to do. Its like advertising where the first 6.5 […]
I’m struggling to believe that this is a poem because it just read like erotic fiction.
Maybe its because its too simple and not intricately written with the depth that’s familair to poetry; it just describes […]
Interesting valentine themed plot….I like the fact that your characters are defined in their characteristics. I also like how you made a general community problem (blocked toilets) pitched them against each […]