Reading through this narrative, I could see your poetic nature trying to evolve into the prosaic; the flowery flow of romantic words thats characteristic of the poetic.
Maybe its in the attempt to be […]
While this was a nicely crafted piece riding on the vehicle on narration via dialogue, where I feel it may have faulted is the inability to properly distinguish and explain the sci fi elements. In some places you […]
Reading this was like reading a burst of writing from a philosophical discuss….it seemed initially like what you’d categorize under poetry but the depth of thought and narrative reflection differentiated […]
Blue eyes ke ? The girl na albino? And is this a series? It looks like it was truncated with the word you left hanging further down?
Keep flexing them romantic muscles yeah…
You have an enjoyable way of […]