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adaobiokwy commented on the post, War a grave 7 years ago
Totally in agreement with you @shaifamily.
Again, the poet here began in the past tense and moved to the present.
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, An Agonizing Sentence 7 years ago
After reading I could connect. While reading though, I literally suffered through a headache brought on by such a long writing without any paragraphs and very long sentences at a time and very many imagery poured […]
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Detective Tel 7 years ago
And you are truly evil, Detective Tel!
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Choices and Fates 7 years ago
This is a nice poem despite the repetitive *even… and the fact that I never knew peace to reside on the other side of a conflict. I thought the side we choose to stay on was the better side…the peaceful one? I […]
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Cry the beloved Country, the Sceptre may not hold 7 years ago
Very nice essay here.
I agree that Nigeria has a lot of bias when it comes to our history esp Nig-Biafra but, I really disagree that keeping quiet about it is the way to go. Its like saying, let’s keep quiet and […] -
adaobiokwy commented on the post, Age is just a number? 7 years ago
This was cool in some places…kept feeling something was missing…maybe the grouping didn’t capture or specify enough…
Ur second group…seemed focused on all but the very people who might have been examples […] -
adaobiokwy commented on the post, Letter To Efezino 7 years ago
touching…
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, The bride that never was. 7 years ago
Deep one
decision of the poet-speaker is that of a victim oBut the same blood flow(s)
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Pieces Of Rags 7 years ago
I liked your first two tales. Would have loved them to be completely separate so I know what am reading or looking for. A tad confusing since they aren’t a whole…
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, The Verdict 7 years ago
@kaycee not fair…
Was a good poem until it went from poetic to…I don’t really know- beginning from “…young friends…”.
Why are they all in capital letters anyway?Okay.
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, King Of Comedy 7 years, 4 months ago
Abrupt ending…beyond pointing out errors, literature corrects…the abrupt ending made me ask, “so?”
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, There is fire on the mountain, perhaps we should run…. 7 years, 4 months ago
“She looked at her husbands face and she knew” Sent chills down my spine…
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Rescuing The Dead 7 years, 4 months ago
Beautiful piece…
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Numbers 7 years, 4 months ago
Really nice tribute…this is more than a poem.
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, To A Kindler Of Hope 7 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, the simplicity…liked that.
Not always good to tell people it’s ur first attempt. People tend to see stuffs not there..
loved how it ended with the husbandman…the tenderer…
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, The Basics Are 7 years, 5 months ago
It’s rare when we see simple sentences produce ‘exotic’ pieces like this…has it all: humour, morals, suspense, appeal (to all as many can relate) and that…simplicity.
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Fast Changes, Slow Changes 7 years, 5 months ago
Deserved what they got?
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adaobiokwy commented on the post, Phoney Pageantry 7 years, 5 months ago
Just okay
Dressed for an occasion, no correlation… no relationship between dressing up for your wedding? an occasion? -
adaobiokwy commented on the post, The Advancement of Intimacy 7 years, 5 months ago
This poem has told the story of many of us…
started like a poem one could sing but… -
adaobiokwy commented on the post, Where Are You, Rashidi? 7 years, 5 months ago
Yes, we remember
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