thanks, and I hope the powers that be in the Nigerian movie industry see it that way

Lovely piece, short and straight to the point

Nice writeup; informative,educative and entertainng all in one piece

I don’t have anything against the Indian and Japanese stuff, just that I get tired and it gets boring with all the unnecessary scenes

Nice to see you guys meet up in Lagos, I hope we have such a meet here in Port Harcourt soon

Is it about technology allowing cheap, good quality movies or having a yearning for giving out the best?
People like James Cameron have carved a niche for themselves, and am sure you know that anything he […]

I read the two parts in a sweep. Nice story, but you are in too much of a hurry to finish it up.
You have enough material to make this story go like 6 or 7 episodes in the series (I think) but you skip the […]

‘…first impression may last long, but a stink impression lasts longer’
This got me laughing a lot, nice writeup

Good story @Nnenna, brings a lot of issues to the fore

Lovely piece. All I learnt about values and respect for others were solely from my mother.
Any man who respects his mother would respect other women,period!

“hmm”…that’s all I can say. Thanks for speaking out for the people who never grew up with a reliable father figure in their lives.

Your piece has good substance, but your presentation is kind of haphazard and points not properly arranged.
I don’t see you as trying to disrespect women by this, I believe you are trying to make a literary […]

No you are not asking for too much, you are just been realistic with you preferences. I have a post here on NS where I also vented my frustrations at what the television screen with the “made in Nigeria” label had […]

This enforces my desire to see the story become a movie o,Nigerian and American cultures at loggerheads. Nice story so far.

Eweeee,dis na BIG kasala…lol
I was so carried away I didn’t even notice errors(eg “…Sunday loved looking up her wife’s dress…”). Good job all the way.
I know there’s more of this coming,and I can;’ wait to […]

I have always wondered the kind of educational system my children will grow into, looking at the trend of events in the last few years.
I believe just as others have pointed out,that the current state is actually […]

Nice story, but you have some typos, like “…unlike those ones that sells” , it should be “sell”.Also, “…and a couple of the bad Mushin boys that comes to take paraga…” that should be “come” there and not […]

I love the story so far and I love the ending

I love the way you write, descriptions and all,lovely piece. But I hate the fact that you didn’t settle to edit this piece well before posting online, it puts people off you know.
Nice thoughts, brings back […]

Musings of a mind gone ‘kolo’ from been sleep-starved…lol.
Start by conquering insomnia, then you can control your mind,believe me.

Well @teewah, I may not be able to give you the technical descriptions or terms relating to what am explaining, but I would refer you to the first quotation in that paragraph, where she said “I do” and when the […]

Nice story, but your conversations got a bit confusing in the 5th paragraph and a few others.
I thought quotation marks are supposed to indicate the thoughts of the person in first person narrative, but when you […]

Nice story, but a few typos here and there that you have to look out for next time.
Then the lyrics of the song you used to open the story should either be in quotations or in italics to differentiate it from the […]

Nice story,and I like the way you take time to describe things, BUT your errors really put me off.
Errors in tenses,typos,and some other lexical errors whose official names I can’t really remember but I just know […]

Primary school plays??? hahahahahaha, that’s a rather strong comparison

Ok…now this is some shit hitting the fan. I have read the first part and this is rather a twist seeing from the other angle.
I like your style with the whole story,its kind of preaching that people don’t jump […]

I wont totally blame it on the economy. I think it also has a lot to do with how much value we place on books as a people.
I don’t know how it is now as I left Secondary School years back,but I used to know that […]