@sibbylwhyte…

Werrin Happin Na? If I smell son’thn nko o?

Er…

*clears throat*

@nicolebassey…

Wetin consaign me with this thing?!

@sambrightomo…

AT NO POINT did I speak any other language than English.

Narrow down. Tighten your prose. Focus!

Good. Get better.

@sambrightomo…

…neht lleW

!uoy pleh ot od nac I gnihton s’erehT

!sodulaS

Hm.

Hm hm.

Fie Fi Fo Fum.

I smell sumpn’.

How interesting…

Good looking Lulu!!!

@febidel…

Who’s fighting? I’m a lover not a.

It’s funny how women are quick to recommend dolls for men – yet it always a woman who brings the ‘pot belly’ thing up.

Just saying.

@febidel…

“biological legimate excuses’ my BIG BLACK BUTT.

You wan talk child bearing abi? We’ve seen plenty women who work such that nothing remains of that post-baby bulge. That’s one.

Two: speak for […]

@febidel dearie…

If there is over a million of those for you,

you don’t want to imagine how many of this is available for us.

Gbabe.

I think the story did well at the beginning, putting us with Aisha and her feelings (which was somehow conflicting; at some point we were in Aisha’s head at other points we were listening to the omnipotent […]

I like this. I really like this.

Good job!

And also as an addition…

I don’t think you should mention particular people for their comments. If I came here, read through this and didn’t see my name in the mentions, I might take it personal and feel […]

Aha. The David story again.

Even though you did a good job taking us from ‘his’ view to ‘her’ view – it seems somewhat superficial to me. I think it would have been better if you had made one of them first […]

Ah…there’s really nothing here.

Or maybe I missed it.

Oh well. Give me more jo!

Yeah. They’ve noted everything to make this story better.

Nice telling.

Keep writing.

DeeP.

The names sha dey do me one kain.

This one’s a step up from the first one.

Keep going.

Aha.

Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe!

Heh!

Congrats girl. Congratulations.

@itsabum…

What’s not to defend? If ladies can walk around with stomachs that make it hard to discern where their boobs end and where their tummies begin, what’s wrong with a guy having a one pack?

Heh.

‘Seeked’ is a common misconception of ‘sought’. And please don’t plead ‘poetic license’.

I think it addresses the theme well.

Some lines up there are kind of awkward. Like ‘I’m just addicted to the one I […]

Exactky what he said.

‘Short story’ ke?! Nna how na?

@innoalifa…talk true. You no read am! Haba!

@kaycee…

That WOULD actually be monumental.

@mariasomorin

Thank you so much. God bless you for your kind words.

You are better, you know that right?

I for one think I’m tired of reading ’10 ways to please your woman’ manuals.

No offence meant. I just think by now men ought to have gotten the memo. You don’t treat her right, you deserve to lose […]

Killed it!!!!

@tamor…

KILLER in the houseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!

Well done.

@sambrightomo…

Do I really need to say anything?