For the first time I kinda agree with Mr. Kaycee. @sibbylwhyte has said what was on my mind. The cuss words are kinda out of place in a Nigerian setting. The characters need more flesh…etc…
Please do more […]

Hope the next installment gives a little more insight about the story. Meanwhile,nice job.
Keep writing…

Creepy…but great! Keep writing.

Creepy…but great!

Sleep-walking or sleep-sexing? Lol. That’s creepy.
Nice story,Ayomitans.

@TolaO Lol. Sometimes its so frustrating to have to go through such stuff in a democratic country. Human rights are constitutional but not practicable in Nigeria. I’m sorry,I guess I’m talking from a lawyer’s […]

Quite a nice story,
Although I found the thought of him being thrown in jail for a crime he allegedly committed 30 years ago,a bit disturbing.
Anyway,stuff like that only happen in Nigeria where Human rights are […]

I started following this series a few days back.You’re doing a great job. Keep it up!

This was quite nice. Keep writing…

Your imagination is stunning. I really really liked this!

Check this: “the question caught her by surprised”
The story’s still good. Keep writing dear.

Mr Hustler,feeling better now,I hope?
Nice story but spotted some punctuation errors,also how does one gaze at a person with disinterest? I think it would have been better as ” I glanced at him with […]

Wow,I’m impressed!

Still got me interested. Keep writing…

Uh…oh…its Tope I pity. The hazards of being the older one. Well done…

Umm…the story is good.The writing however, needs some work. Attend to comment two.
Keep writing!

Welcome back. Well done.

Quite a nice piece. Kudos!

Nice piece,dear. All the best.

A great read.Nice suspense too. I await the next part dear.

Me likey. Thumbs up!

The end?

Hmmm…she better be careful this time.
Keep writing…

They’ve said it all.Sad but nice tale.
Keep writing…

Its a miracle! Mr.Randy is becoming a changed man. Lol. Keep going…

I like the message behind this story but the writing itself is poor. If you re-write this using the appropriate tenses,punctuations and spellings,this would be a masterpiece.
Keep writing…

@banky Thanks a lot for stopping by.I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Very vivid and tragic. Not one survivor?I was almost wondering what the title had to do with the piece until I read the end. This was well-written.The tenses were consistent. But of course,what more can one expect […]

Well@topazo I’m sorry for airing my view; since the masters have spoken…I’d better shut up.I agree,I know nothing about men.