4 thoughts on “I love you” by Funmi Fasipe (@Funmilolafash)

  1. I like the last words; You don’t need to deserve it, I love you. Nice poem Funmi!

  2. I doubt the last words; “You don’t need to deserve it”, why not love a mad woman/man instead, or even a street beggar? Why a beautiful/educated/skillful/attractive damsel/prince? Love is not coincidental dear, it is triggered by something deserving. #fact

    I like the flow of the poem, it should sweep a lady off her feet.

    Keep writing
    @funmilolafash

  3. Thank you @vanessa . @levuz you don’t need to deserve it, I love you! It deeper than what you’re thinking. That’s one way to look at it but not the only way. Thank you for reading. Your comments are inspiring :)

  4. Beautiful poem.

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