Dark and light

Life and death are but natural cousins
Though you might paint death black
And beautify life white
But remember, for many souls
Life is but darkness
And death,the only light.



6 thoughts on “Dark and light” by obiink (@obiink)

  1. So short?????

    And it held the true facts in it’s six lines

  2. @obiink. Once again you have captivated me with your short and precise use of poetry.

    1. thanks…
      its been long i took a sip from your creativity,.
      more ink to your pen

  3. “Life and death are but natural cousins
    Though you might paint death black
    And beautify life white
    But remember, for many souls
    Life is but darkness
    And death, the only light. ”

    I’m giving back to you what you gave us. It was quite a beautiful piece. Lately, I’ve learned that length is the greatest hindrance around town. You don’t need a thousand words in order to get your point across. Good job on this!!

  4. Succinct and a good read.

    In my opinion however, I think saying that they are cousins is a little bit far for the description. I think life and death are unidentical twins with opposing behavioural attitude. I agree with the rest…

    Nice one @obiink

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