sometimes my dreams get so big
am forced to shrink.
Gold plated reverie,I could almost touch them.
I want it all yet, they stand tall.this walls.
time keeps rolling
it’s marathon never ending
my bones deep in bitter romance with stress
the lazy takes over the body,
fear sips in,
then my teeth sinks into the depths of reality.
I like to dream sometimes……..
I like to dream too sometimes because it keeps me in perspective. A nice poem indeed!
Thanks
@katiee…always welcome. You could check out my poem at http://www.naijastories.com/2014/03/elove-poetry-peeling-back-the-mask/. Thanks.
This one is not good at all.
Your opinion…feel free to dislike it…thanks .
@kaycee, but you could encourage @katiee to keep on and keep her passion alive…
This is a good poem…but I think you had some unnecessary punctuations in there…somewhere
Thanks..correction noted
a poem but with unnecessary punctuations.
The poem needs a little touch.