Poetry

Dreams…

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sometimes my dreams get so big

am forced to shrink.

Gold plated reverie,I could almost touch them.

I want it all yet, they stand tall.this walls.

time keeps rolling

it’s marathon never ending

my bones deep in bitter romance with stress

the lazy takes over the body,

fear sips in,

then my teeth sinks into the depths of reality.

I like to dream sometimes……..



10 thoughts on “Dreams…” by katiee (@katiee)

  1. innoalifa (@innoalifa)
    March 31, 2014 at 4:07 am  

    I like to dream too sometimes because it keeps me in perspective. A nice poem indeed!

    1. katiee (@katiee)
      March 31, 2014 at 7:17 am  

      Thanks

      1. innoalifa (@innoalifa)
        March 31, 2014 at 9:40 am  

        @katiee…always welcome. You could check out my poem at http://www.naijastories.com/2014/03/elove-poetry-peeling-back-the-mask/. Thanks.

  2. kaycee (@kaycee)
    March 31, 2014 at 6:05 am  

    This one is not good at all.

    1. katiee (@katiee)
      March 31, 2014 at 2:34 pm  

      Your opinion…feel free to dislike it…thanks .

  3. innoalifa (@innoalifa)
    March 31, 2014 at 9:42 am  

    @kaycee, but you could encourage @katiee to keep on and keep her passion alive…

  4. Honeywrites (@Rachel_Williams)
    April 1, 2014 at 6:13 am  

    This is a good poem…but I think you had some unnecessary punctuations in there…somewhere

    1. katiee (@katiee)
      April 2, 2014 at 11:43 pm  

      Thanks..correction noted

  5. April 16, 2014 at 8:55 am  

    a poem but with unnecessary punctuations.

  6. Adanna Otuechere (@Ada123)
    May 21, 2016 at 5:49 pm  

    The poem needs a little touch.

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