“He, She And The Wall”

The pathetic event of the day, “the wonderful absence of the tongue, though the stew was the sweetest”, HE said. The lovely naive moments of her career, “even though she’d lived many years without HER lips; Yet the kiss was the nicest she’s ever had”, SHE proclaimed!

The tales of He and SHE, the mingling story of ‘HIM’ and ‘HER’.
The blind days looked bizarre, they’d loved and thought it would never end, both of them marching into the jungle. Oh! Inspirational; the days they’d loved. The story of two young lovers;

“HE said SHE is the best thing that has ever happened to him; SHE blushed so heavily there’s no one like him” , they both teased and sagged along their eyes. Though no string was attached from the outset, but now it’d help to hold the ends!

So happy the moments they shared, the ocean of love flew so gently; So funny how our hearts get drifted, drifted into the ocean of love; that it never gets time to swim back it’s shore! As an external threat on SHE, proves nothing, a melon cover! They started talking about hooking, added to the swallowed popcorn; a sea water! Wall’s ear being deaf for a while; time for it to twist its tongue for help!

Lo and behold, the wall did its part; it changed their plans. Jealous fever pricked its eyelid. HE planned some moments with SHE, SHE even cared about HE taking her to picnic; yet the wall smiles along it’s own plan. “this wall have got some cracks”, said SHE; told HE to let them stay away, that she’d prefer the picnic; but HE flattered.

“Pleasant moments, to play around her cheeks; to cast away her early morning cold” HE’s inner mind’s thought, yet SHE’s feelings never cease; Wall’s inner mind clearly written over her skull, though SHE’s got even with HE, but she’s ready to kick the wall, a basket. But since HE has gotten the whistles, SHE can only help but listen!

She faked the smile and they continued rocking, never knew it was the moments for the rocks, and so the witty wall manifested the evil day; with the cold turning hot, changed its flow. Alas have crushed their path! You’re damned O yea WALL! As you wavered their hide and seek; As the ‘COLD MORNING TURNED HOT’.



10 thoughts on ““He, She And The Wall”” by Kleavajimcy (@Kleavajimcy)

  1. The post is poetic no doubt, and I can see the tell-tale signs of a love gone wrong. Cool.
    Let me state the words that ran through my head as I read this; Beautiful non-sense. I don’t mean that in a derogatory sense.
    Keep writing Klea. Well done. $ß.

  2. Thank God @Sibbylwhyte has said it first so I can echo and claim no be me start am. Victor, Victor, Victor, have you joined the Dream Stories club? Or do you need me to come give you a pat on the head with an hammer?

    What a waste of beautiful words. #Vexing#

    1. Hehehe @hymar… I nofit laugh oooo! № be me U go blame for their love sotry that ended soberly na!….so if it had been “and they lived happily ever after” now, beautiful words wouldn’t have been wasted abi?? Chooii Funny guy!…♡̬̩̃̊ƭћªΩќs♡̬̩̃̊ for reading and commenting Bro!

  3. @sibbylwhyte, lol…yeah! I quite know what you meant! Enough words for young lovers out there… I’d stay back to look and write!
    ♡̬̩̃̊ƭћªΩќs♡̬̩̃̊ for the comment!

  4. @kleavajimcy, it looks like you were trying for something poetic, but this didn’t work for me at all.

    1. @TolaO, hehheehe… Is it that could not understand the write up, or you don’t see it as poetic! ‘Coz this is quite as straight_forward as it is dynamic!

      It now depends on personal views, experiences, judgements and intellects!

      ♡̬̩̃̊ƭћªΩќs♡̬̩̃̊ for passing by all the way!

      1. @kleavajimcy, I didn’t understand it.

        Take the opening paragraph:

        The pathetic event of the day, “the wonderful absence of the tongue, though the stew was the sweetest”, HE said. The lovely naive moments of her career, “even though she’d lived many years without HER lips; Yet the kiss was the nicest she’s ever had”, SHE proclaimed!

        What pathetic event? I’m not sure.

        Maybe “wonderful absence of tongue” means someone was silent; I don’t know.

        “Though the stew was sweetest” – had ‘SHE’ just fed ‘HE’, and was he commending her? I don’t know?

        “Naive moments of her career” – which career?

        My point is that it’s possible that if I read the poem further, I might find out the answer to these questions – but I’m not really motivated to tax my brain so much when I should be enjoying the poem instead.

  5. @TolaO

    Got your points… But there are times you just have to work your brain in other to enjoy the poem! Some poems are full of big big grammars…lol

    While some just contain the twist of words… This is one of those…

    “The wonderful absence of the tongue” does not necessarily go in one way without the concluding part…since the tongue is not just performing the “talking” task! U taste with your tongue, don’t U?

    Someone that doesn’t have a tongue, yet he claims the stew is sweet! Aint that ironic?

    The phrase denotes the condition when the “Implausible becomes possible”…

    “The naïve moments of her career….”

    Reading further and seeing the only career being displayed in this poem, you’ll see that the only carry here is “love”

    Sorry for the twists and turns…
    You’re the first to ever have a complaint about this write up tho’

    I’ll be glad to know if I had helped a lil..

    Mercii..

  6. @TolaO

    Got your points… But there are times you just have to work your brain in other to enjoy the poem! Some poems are full of big big grammars…lol

    While some just contain the twist of words… This is one of those…

    “The wonderful absence of the tongue” does not necessarily go in one way without the concluding part…since the tongue is not just performing the “talking” task! U taste with your tongue, don’t U?

    Someone that doesn’t have a tongue, yet he claims the stew is sweet! Aint that ironic?

    The phrase denotes the condition when the “Implausible becomes possible”…

    “The naïve moments of her career….”

    Reading further and seeing the only career being displayed in this poem, you’ll see that the only carry here is “love”

    Sorry for the twists and turns…
    You’re the first to ever have a complaint about this write up tho’

    I’d be glad to know if I had helped a lil..

    Mercii..

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