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Lookout for Miss Right- Episode 21

Standing in the doorway like a bull getting ready to fight was someone I had come to fear more than the devil himself. Sonia.

Barbs and I scrambled to our feet, half-naked. I was clad in my boxers, Barbs in her bra and panties, clutching the bed sheet.

“What is going on here?” Sonia bellowed again. She began advancing into the room, a crazed look in her eyes.

“Sonia, let’s talk about this please…” Barbs was saying.

“Talk? Talk? Okay…let’s talk about how you stole Austin from me! And now Jake!” Sonia screamed. She turned to me. “Is this your sick mother, you bastard?”

I didn’t know what to say, especially now that I knew her mental condition.

“Sonia…” I began.

“Shut up! Just shut up!” She yelled. “Barbara, you slut! I warned you never to come near my man, didn’t I?”

“It’s not my fault they prefer me” Barbara wasn’t backing down. “And don’t you dare call me a slut again! How did you get in here? Get out! Get out now!”

Her words were cut off with a resounding slap. I hadn’t seen that coming.

Barbara reared back like a wounded cat. I thought she would start crying, the next thing I knew she had landed an equally resounding slap on Sonia’s face.

I was confused. If there was one thing I had learnt, it was never to get in the middle of a ladies’ ruckus. But I couldn’t leave them to kill themselves.

“Ladies please…” I began

It was no use; they had pounced on each other already. I did the first thing that came to my mind. I packed the rest of my clothing and exited the room as quickly as possible.

Why did trouble always have to catch up with me? I asked myself as I crawled into my car and slammed the door behind me.

Within minutes I was out of there and on my way home. I changed my mind when I remembered that Sonia knew my house and could easily find me.

I went to the only place I knew I could go. Oscar’s.

I didn’t know how I was going to face Femi, knowing what I had almost done. We hadn’t had sex technically, I consoled myself. But you were going to, another voice reminded me.

Well, Femi didn’t have to know about it. I couldn’t stand having him mad at me. So, I decided to keep it a secret and hope that Barbs would too.

Thinking of Barbs made me feel guilty. I had left her alone in the hands of a maniac. What if something terrible happened? Sonia was crazy and would go any length to have me. What if this led to something more serious?

With these nagging thoughts, I made a U- turn and began driving back to Barb’s place. I was partly responsible for the situation, so it only made sense that I do my best to salvage the damage.

I arrived barely twenty minutes later and rushed inside. The living room was empty as before, so I guessed that they were still in the bedroom. I made my way to the room cautiously and stood at the door. Both women stood facing themselves, like a staring contest. They were obviously tired of using their fists. I don’t think they knew I was there.

“He’s mine. I don’t want you near him” I heard Sonia say.

Barbs threw back her head and laughed drily. “If he’s yours…what was he doing in my bed?”

“You seduced him, just like you seduced Austin.” Sonia spat the words out with venom. “Just like you seduced my father!”

I gasped. Chief Odeniran and Barbara? Oh my God…

“Oh please…your father wanted me. He came after me. Guys find me irresistible, deal with it!”

Was she actually boasting about it? I wondered. The thought dawned on me that I had become one of those guys. First Femi, then Austin, now Chief Odeniran… what else didn’t I know about Barbara Bode- Johnson?

“Guys find you cheap! Irresistible is in your imagination. Stay away from me, Barbara…or you’ll see the bitch in me!” Sonia said in a menacing voice.

“Get out of here! You’re crazy!” Barbs yelled

It was at this point I stepped into the room. Both ladies instantly quieted.

“I think it’s time to leave, Sonia.” I said as calmly as possible.

She glared at me, the pointed a finger in my face: “You belong to me…and if I can’t have you, no one else can.”

With that she stormed out of the room. We waited until we heard her slam the front door behind her before our heart was put at rest.

“I thought you left?” Barbs asked.

“I did. Then I came back.” I watched her. My earlier attraction had faded.

She managed a small smile, and then touched my face. “My hero. See how crazy my cousin is? I can’t believe she threatened you”

I moved away from her. There was a lot about her I didn’t know, and it made me uncomfortable.

“What’s wrong?” She asked. Her face was swollen in the places Sonia had hit her.

“Why does Sonia hate you so much?” I asked.

“Sonia hates everyone. It’s her mental condition.”

“Is she really your cousin?” I asked.

“Why all these questions? Am I being interrogated?” She was frowning at me.

“Just answer me.” I said shortly.

She stood. “No. I’m going to take a bath. You can help if you want.”

I stood too, and held her by the arm. “Answer me, Barbs.”

“You are not my boyfriend! I don’t have to answer your questions!” She yelled. “Let go of me!”

“So, who’s your boyfriend? Femi or Chief Odeniran?” The question was out before I knew it.

“You son of a bitch!” She loosened herself from my grip and raised her hand to hit me. I was faster than her and stopped her hand in mid- air.

“The truth is bitter, huh?” I asked sarcastically.

She eyed me furiously. “Well, deal with this truth… Femi is on his way here. I wonder what he’ll think when I tell him what transpired between us.”

I glared at her, and noticed that my heart began to beat a little faster than normal.

“You’re bluffing.” I said.

“Try me.”

I stood, wondering if I was ready to take that risk.

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10 thoughts on “Lookout for Miss Right- Episode 21” by Mimiadebayo (@Mimiadebayo)

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    Da'Queen (@Estee): Senior Scribe - 29805 pts

    Unbelievable! Barbs is a pervert gosh!

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    Olan (@Olan): Scribe - 15363 pts

    whoo….Sonia, had actually missed her.

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    Mimiadebayo (@Mimiadebayo): Head Wordsmith - 211421 pts

    @Estee.Abi? Just like Jenny from the Hustler series. Thanks for reading!
    @Olan.Yea she did. Thanks for reading!

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    schatzilein (@schatzilein): Scribe - 12005 pts

    This jake should go for cleansing..too much crazy women in his life

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    topazo (@topazo): Head Wordsmith - 58959 pts

    this is nice, well written and the emotions well captured and looks so real… d dialogue ws fluid.. totally beautiful.
    a few typos though.

    love d build up of the story and the heightening tension…
    keep it up.

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    Mimiadebayo (@Mimiadebayo): Head Wordsmith - 211421 pts

    @schatzilein. Yes ooh. Just too many crazy women. Thanks for reading!
    @topazo.Your comment is highly appreciated. Thank you!

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    Ayoks (@sucess001): Head Wordsmith - 207540 pts

    lovely!

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    Shally-Ashimi (@Shally-Ashimi): Junior Writer - 4017 pts

    INTERESTING STORY!

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    Sunshine (@nicolebassey): Head Wordsmith - 51293 pts

    This was well done. The ending is a blend of a good close and a rough hook leaving readers wanting more. Good job!

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    innoalifa (@innoalifa): Head Wordsmith - 111614 pts

    incredible

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