And Fire Lies Waiting.

And Fire Lies Waiting.

 

Dry sticks

A forest prepared for conflagration

And how great the matter

The little spark will kindle

 

Petrol in our drinking water

How will we put out the fire

 

We will plunge

But now we breathe deep

With open mouths

Hacking and harrowing

Our respiration

Breaks the silence of night

Darkness still

The crack of malnourished ribs

Unseen

Unheard

The mosquitoes are fatter than the tenants of the house

The parasite is larger than the host

 

The storm is coming

But now the surface of the water is glass

Not a ripple to be seen

And in the depths

The monster writhes in tension

His teeth are red with blood

His eyes are gold

His talons are black with oily mud

He is suffocating

 

And every scale, every boil, every claw, every sore

All of him

Is hot

With the thought of vengeance

 

His sons roam the streets

They will unleash him

 

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14 thoughts on “And Fire Lies Waiting.” by Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer)

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    chemokopi (@chemokopi): Head Wordsmith - 281021 pts

    I really like this.

    I see three scenes rendered with interesting and beautiful imagery. But I fail to see the connection between them thus making it difficult for me to comprehend the poem as a whole unit.

    Well done boss. The poet in you definitely shone.

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      Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer): Head Wordsmith - 49153 pts

      Oga @chemokopi, thanks for commenting. For me, the whole poem is one emotion.

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    topazo (@topazo): Head Wordsmith - 58829 pts

    Nice imagery…lol @the mosquitoesar fatter than the tenants of the house…that na serious matter

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      Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer): Head Wordsmith - 49153 pts

      LOL…yes o. Real serious matter…

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    joel (@joel): Newbie - 215 pts

    beutiful piece. My first time on this platform,u make it worthwhile. Fire on the mountain ooooo!

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      Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer): Head Wordsmith - 49153 pts

      Mr Joel, @joel, welcome to NS!!! I’m honoured my poem is one of the first things you read and you like it. Thanks.

      Fire on the mountain truly..

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    EXCELLENCY (@excellency): Scribe - 13125 pts

    @guywriterer, I enjoy this. Is this prophetic? What I think it’s saying, is that; trouble brews and the peacemakers have been paralyzed…

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      Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer): Head Wordsmith - 49153 pts

      Thanks for enjoying. I hope it’s prophetic, but only positively. When the fire comes down from the mountain, I pray only the guilty are burned.

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    Eletrika (@babyada): Wordsmith - 36341 pts

    You write well.

    Though, the poem’s imagery in the middle made it seem disjointed from the start.

    But I got the message.

    Well done.

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      Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer): Head Wordsmith - 49153 pts

      Lady Eletrika, one of the First Ladies of NS!!! Thank you.

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        Eletrika (@babyada): Wordsmith - 36341 pts

        I’m that by omission. Because the real first ladies went away. Just the way the presidents like you did.

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    jollyone (@jollyone): Junior Writer - 3260 pts

    The forest is prepared for fire and the monster is eager to break surface! Hmmm… I Hope to not be at all near when it all comes to a head!

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      Gboyega Otolorin (@guywriterer): Head Wordsmith - 49153 pts

      Indeed…

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    innoalifa (@innoalifa): Head Wordsmith - 102759 pts

    this got me

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