Oct 252012
Crushing desires
you throb my life out
you are strong and wild
racing to exit my mind
you rush
but are you rash or rational?
You are daring
By this I am thrilled.
I know you;
you are but blind
a blind warrior
riding an energetic horse
valiant to bring your wish to pass.


Great work.
Great and energetic ideas rule the world.
So are you reining it in or letting it all out??? This feels like a taste of the pudding-very unsatisfactory
Not the poem o, the pudding
Nice!
Thank you all so much for your comments