Oct 182012
Love beautiful…love make you fool
Love tend your heart…love rend your heart
Love give you glee…love make you flee
Love make you give…love make you pay
Love sweet…love grit your teeth
Love make you shine…love make you shine your eye
Love finds you out…love calls you out
Love special…love sensual
Love holds your hand…love fall your hand
Love makes you rise…love bow your head
Love give you joy…love make you toil
Love wipe your tears…love make you fear
Yet…love beautiful.
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dwisebaba @dwise4life
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“Love holds your hand…love fall your hand”
I love that line.
Now, I don’t understand your vocabulary. Were/are you writing in English or pidgin English?
Imagine this line:
“Love beautiful…love make you fool”
It’s a simple yet simple poem.
Well done.
@Seun-Odukoya Thanks boss! The language confuse even me sef lol!. I chose lines that would conjure everyday situations and I hope they served the purpose.
Na wa o
Love is a number of things, damned cupid responds the way we relate. I think you did pidgin or were randomly switching.
@daireenonline My thoughts exactly on cupid. Thanks!!!