Virgin Page

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Oct 222012
 

Virgin page

staring smugly up at me

innocent, untainted

Virgin page

staring back at me, confident and defiant

mocking my inability to commit

i crack my knuckles willing inspiration to appear

i will fill you up i swear

i will defile you.

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  14 Responses to “Virgin Page”

  1. Avatar of Seun-Odukoya
    Seun-Odukoya @ says:
    October 23, 2012 at 12:09 am

    Nice!!!!

    Go and defile that @#$%&!!!!

    Heh.

  2. Avatar of shadiat
    shadiat @ says:
    October 23, 2012 at 12:44 am

    Short and nice. Me likes.

  3. Avatar of kaycee
    kaycee @ says:
    October 23, 2012 at 8:58 am

    Simple. Virginity is for dis virginity.

  4. Avatar of Myne
    Myne @ says:
    October 23, 2012 at 12:05 pm

    LOL…I feel you.

  5. Avatar of midas
    midas @ says:
    October 27, 2012 at 2:53 am

    Don’t we all want to ravage that blank page/screen with brimming tales and break upon its virginity with a poised pen or drumming keys ???

  6. Avatar of Melody
    Melody @ says:
    October 29, 2012 at 9:00 am

    Nice piece Afro

  7. Avatar of Jaywriter
    Jaywriter @ says:
    October 29, 2012 at 2:44 pm

    Nice lines.

  8. Avatar of Jaywriter
    Jaywriter @ says:
    October 29, 2012 at 2:45 pm

    And by the way, you also need to make sure the paper enjoys the act too, looool.

  9. Avatar of afroscribe
    afroscribe @ says:
    October 30, 2012 at 1:34 am

    Thanks guys, i’m sure y’all have felt the frustration at some point.But the persistent writer cannot be denied for long. Keep it up and she will succumb.Letting you spill your ink into her virgin depths.

  10. Avatar of Afronuts
    Afronuts @ says:
    October 30, 2012 at 7:49 am

    lol…I love this.

    Writer’s block being showcased as cock-blocking…genius!

  11. Avatar of Omotola
    Omotola @ says:
    October 31, 2012 at 6:05 am

    Nice! Nice! Nice! Simple, short and straighforward. Kudos

  12. Avatar of Ohmston Weth
    Ohmston Weth @ says:
    October 31, 2012 at 9:11 pm

    Beautiful.

  13. Avatar of chemokopi
    chemokopi @ says:
    November 2, 2012 at 12:37 pm

    For some of us it is now Virgin screen? Lol. Nice.

  14. Avatar of missmeddle
    missmeddle @ says:
    November 4, 2012 at 5:48 am

    Laughing so hard at the “I will defile you” line. I wrote something similar a while ago. I shall post it now!
    Cheers :-)

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