Rain Drops Posted by victoria 46 views Poetry Oct 252012 F a l l s D r o p s S p l a s h R I p p l e B u b b l e That is how you appear to me Comments comments victoria @victoria Go to victoria's profile, and read more of his/her posts. 9 Responses to “Rain Drops” chemokopi @ (Head Wordsmith - 219899 pts) says: October 25, 2012 at 4:24 am Looks interesting… but i couldn’t connect with it visually or literally. Log in to Reply Myne @ (Senior Scribe - 25822 pts) says: October 25, 2012 at 7:39 am This was quite short. I guess it makes sense to you, but maybe not so much to the reader. Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144302 pts) says: October 26, 2012 at 1:32 am I like it!! Really creative. Appearing like rain drops, is that a good thing or bad? Nice one. Different. Log in to Reply chemokopi @ (Head Wordsmith - 219899 pts) says: October 26, 2012 at 4:43 am @kaycee: wow, I am just seeing the form! And that’s because I am now reading this from my phone. @victoria: I like this now. Log in to Reply victoria @ (Junior Writer - 1468 pts) says: October 27, 2012 at 11:09 am @kaycee i wouldn’t know if its a gud thing or a bad thing either. The poem was actually and originally shaped like a rain or tear drop when i typed and posted but the end product came out dis way, and d poem had no tittle, i supposed Admin gave it its tittle “Rain drop” n idont knw if am suppose to be happy abt it. Tnks 4 all of ya comments but i actually would want to c more constructive criticisms, am trying to grow Log in to Reply kaycee @ (Head Wordsmith - 144302 pts) says: October 29, 2012 at 2:22 am I read this again. It is excellent. What would you have titled it? Log in to Reply victoria @ (Junior Writer - 1468 pts) says: November 2, 2012 at 6:29 am i don’t ve the faintest idea@kaycee Log in to Reply vescucci @ (Writer - 8988 pts) says: October 30, 2012 at 12:44 am Eeyah. I know how it feels to hide patterns in your poems and people just miss it . The word editor on the site is a little hard to control Log in to Reply victoria @ (Junior Writer - 1468 pts) says: November 2, 2012 at 6:28 am my thought exactly@vescucci Log in to Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply You must be logged in to post a comment.