@kaycee i wouldn’t know if its a gud thing or a bad thing either. The poem was actually and originally shaped like a rain or tear drop when i typed and posted but the end product came out dis way, and d poem had no tittle, i supposed Admin gave it its tittle “Rain drop” n idont knw if am suppose to be happy abt it. Tnks 4 all of ya comments but i actually would want to c more constructive criticisms, am trying to grow
Looks interesting… but i couldn’t connect with it visually or literally.
This was quite short. I guess it makes sense to you, but maybe not so much to the reader.
I like it!! Really creative.
Appearing like rain drops, is that a good thing or bad?
Nice one. Different.
@kaycee: wow, I am just seeing the form! And that’s because I am now reading this from my phone.
@victoria: I like this now.
@kaycee i wouldn’t know if its a gud thing or a bad thing either. The poem was actually and originally shaped like a rain or tear drop when i typed and posted but the end product came out dis way, and d poem had no tittle, i supposed Admin gave it its tittle “Rain drop” n idont knw if am suppose to be happy abt it. Tnks 4 all of ya comments but i actually would want to c more constructive criticisms, am trying to grow
I read this again. It is excellent.
What would you have titled it?
i don’t ve the faintest idea@kaycee
Eeyah. I know how it feels to hide patterns in your poems and people just miss it
. The word editor on the site is a little hard to control
my thought exactly@vescucci