There was a time….

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August 14, 2012     7.35am

There was a time…

A long, almost forgotten time

When we would lie in the shade beside the muddy pool

Sleeping and basking in the sunset cool

That was when life was fun

When the day was lit by the sun

When brothers didn’t march the streets in thirsty search

Of blood to spill and lives to butcher.

*

I remember the time…

A Long, almost forgotten time

When we gathered and played in the yard

Little children with no expectation beyond what we had

Clothes dirtied from rollicking in the sands

Mud, spittle and other unspeakable dirt on our feet and hands

A time, almost long forgotten time

When play and fun wasn’t frowned at as wasting time

A time we had to be us and just be free.

*

I remember the time…

A long, almost forgotten time

When having a crush was silly and nothing more

When a blush would bring so much ribbing and yakking from friends and foe

We just had fun with no care and worry for the morrow

But, life happened and now all we know is heartbreak and sorrow.

*

I remember the time…

A long, almost forgotten time

Fraught with pain, loss, abuse and a forlorn hope

For a love  soured with the flatulence from the winds of time

Carried away on the wings of painful memory

The memory only a flicker of unsavory imagery

Deep loss, sorrow and heart-wrenching pain

Served by Love

From a bloodied hand from an almost forgotten time.

Merci.

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  34 Responses to “There was a time….”

  1. Avatar of Seun-Odukoya

    well…

    I would say ‘nice’. It did bring back some memories though.

    Nice.

  2. Avatar of kaycee

    This is great!
    Respect!

  3. Avatar of ablyguy

    Cool… Who else would have written that?

  4. Avatar of kayceenj

    A joy-read! :-)

  5. There was a time when

    Blackberry and apple were just fruits

    People lived in peace

    When children love to face their books….

    Great write.Kudos!

  6. Avatar of chemokopi

    This is nice at Shai. It did strike a cord. Well done sir.

  7. Avatar of gabbleTalker

    nice…made me remba that ‘time’

  8. Avatar of yahayamadu

    @Shaifamily Superb.

  9. Avatar of Purple

    Resplendent…
    What more can I say?

  10. Avatar of Ville

    yeah, this is splendid

  11. Avatar of khadijahmuhammad

    This is poignant.

  12. Avatar of Daireen

    hmmm… but now we’ve grown ba?

  13. Avatar of ayistar

    Changes are inevitable…
    Gone are those days…
    Let’s enjoy the present as we plan for the future

    Shai, u try well, well!

    • Avatar of shaifamily

      @ayistar
      True, time changes. Nothing to do about that…but let us still retain what is good in the memories we had. People bombing others they most likely grew up with, played with even probably had sex with is all so wrong!
      We should remember…

  14. Avatar of Kiah

    this made me long for ‘the time’ :)

    great job!

  15. Avatar of Afronuts

    Reflections…nostalgia all put in colorful lines singing a wishful tune…

    nice. Typical shai.

  16. Avatar of midas

    Nice rendering bro.

    This line I particularly like…
    “For a love soured with the flatulence from the winds of time”

  17. Avatar of sambright

    Who else can this craft be ascribed? But to the one and only @shai…@shaifamily you sabi this thing no be small.See dem lyrics tight man.You nailed this one perfectly man.Chop knuckle man.You Gbasky man. I love this @shaifamily, you are indeed a poet with distinction.
    Thank you for sharing.

  18. Avatar of shaifamily

    @sambrightomo errrm, ok o!
    Merci….

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