WRITTEN JAN 25 2012
I’ve seen alot of girls under the
sun
but my lady remains the number
one.
Seriously aint no woman like my
woman
Alot about her rotates my head,
call me a fan
First, she has a seductive touch
like SCZESNY
so when she hold my balls its hard
to say free me.
She’s a model, sleek and slender
like MERTSERKER
Little wonder a brother like me
cant resist her.
She has an improved protruding
hips, i call it KOSCIELNY
coz its softly strong and elevated
like a balcony
she wrote a tattoo on it with the
name VERMALEAN
giving that backstage a swag so
mean.
When i strung my spanish guitar
She twist rhythmically with my
balls like ARTETA
Her dribbles on me seduces me like
crazy
and i luz my mind when she
moans in welsh ooh arh RAMSEY
(/raem.zi/)
Surely i’m into her like shez into
me
so i smooch her balls from the
middle like ROSICKY
My lips found peace on her belly
button
so i named it WILSHERE so dat,
that part of her wont be
forgotten.
My lady is a phenominal woman
classy, sexy and strong
though she aint african, shez an
epitome, ALEX SONG
When she catwalks from the
flanks i’m like, “thats my queen”
coz she alwaz introduces
something amazing, have u heard
of OXLADE-CHAMBERL EAN?
This my sweet sugar banana no
dey slack
ever enterprishng like when
GERVINHO dey push attack
chai! Omalicha, so cute like
WALCOT
Intelligent and opulent,
everything haterz are not.
She will alwaz be the VIP OF MY
HEART
Like RVP to scoring goals we wud
never be apart.
Believe me aint no woman like my
ARSENAL
I LOVE HER COZ SHE IS AN ARSENAL
AUDIO: say my prayer www.mp3twit.com/download.php?songid=lT7
I wish you had done a better job than this. You had a good idea but the execution is sub-par.
And I’m not just saying this cos I am a Man U fan
it will get better
like seriously???? I am not competing for anything with this, its just an xpression of my thoughts and my thoughts are not good enough. Hmmm, well thank you for the opinion
@joecool, I believe you joined this site for a reason. And if those reasons don’t include helping you get better, I’d be very surprised.
That said, your poem can be improved to express your thoughts excellently. Try to work on it again, and all those unpronounceable words in block letters should be reconsidered.
Keep writing. You have raw skills that would be beautiful when properly honed.
@joecool, I believe you joined this site for some reasons. And if those reasons don’t include helping you get better, I’d be very surprised.
That said, your poem can be improved to express your thoughts excellently. Try to work on it again, and all those unpronounceable words in block letters should be reconsidered.
Keep writing. You have raw skills that would be beautiful when properly honed.
When I had my well-articulated comments, there was the ‘comments-off’ tag and now…it won’t be so articulate. Please what do all those names represent? Are they expressions of a particular language or coded messages I can attempt to decipher?
@Myne: lool, its coz you are fan mehn. But anyways thanks for checking in
@mikeeffa: sure it would get better. Some introduce themselves with something grand. I choose otherwise. I watching ur space my friend
@mikeeffa: sure it would get better. Some introduce themselves with something grand. I choose otherwise. I am watching ur space my friend
@QueenNobo: lool, i bet you shouldn’t. I would dedicate my next piece to you. And those “unpronounceable words” are names of footballers. I am a fan of Arsenal fc, England. I used the names of the players to xpress my love for the club which i viewed as a woman.
I dropped an audio link of a spoken word track i did, if u kindly listen and i still fall below par i would…*thinking* sha do listen and let me have ur thoughts. ¤winks¤ thanks kwiin
@midredHughes: kinda like your name, it catches my fancy. Well, unto your comment, they are names of footballers, Arsenal fc players specifically. Most of us are good with written words others are good with spoken words. I would appreciate if you do use the link after the piece, download, just a 2.3mb file and leave me your thoughts. I appreciate ur words my friend.
Oh…this a rap song?
I knew it…
@afronuts: yea, if you use the shakespearen poetry eye to read it, i think i cud be banned from writing. But poetry is evolving and spoken word is taking the lead. I appreciate the fact that u knew where i was headed. Good instinct bro
Okay…maybe its because I’m not a football fan that I’m not identifying well with the poem…I was confused on reading those capitalized words wondering what on earth they meant. It was not until I ruminated ‘Arsenal’ again that I sort of understood.