Where are you now the one i cared for the most
can you take my hands i want to be close
you helped me when i was down
you lifted me up from the ground
you thought me right from wrong
you helped me to stay strong
where are u now the one with the kindest heart
its been 4 years i’v been torn apart
i wish you could take my hand and once again stay with me
i need you, you need me, how could you leave me
i’m broken, i’m shattered, dreams gone hope dashed fantasy lost
life judgement on us was unjust
there in heaven with you are hopes that were never raised
hands that would never give praise
ideas that would never come to stay
beauty that would never be portrayed
my kids that would never see the day
our passion that were all betrayed
love that was never fulfilled
and a heart of mine dat may never be healed
its been 4 years you have been gone
4 years with my heart that mourn
4 years of lonely yawning
4 dead years with a life so boring
its been 4 years now, the days just come and go
but the pain never really leaves your soul
life can begin and end so fast
but the memory of you deary wil always last
where is the good in the goodbyes
when all it does is to leave ocean in my eyes
i would have sacrificied my life for you to be living
my spirit, our friendship, my soul i would have given
but its been 4 years so i want you to know that i loved you
and no matter how well you knew, i want you to love me too
i hope u are happy, i hope to see you soon
even if its like yearning to see the dark side of the moon
♥ IN MEMORY OF U, CUTE IB ♥
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Every day Nigerians lose people that are dear to them, death breaks our heart, leaving us lonely. This poem is dedicated to those that have lost the ones they loved, it could be father, mother, brother, sister, girlfriend, boyfriend, husband, wife or child. To their irreplaceable memory.


Nice piece, my brother.
Ok. I think this poem is dedicated to someone who is dead. So, I would say sorry for that.
Now to your poem: I think it needs work to make it shine.
An Ode to a lost love. nice poem. Once in a lifetime ….
I know this isnt your best effort.
Sure, it aint, thanks for noticing @kaycee
There is some good stuff in somewhere.
Poignant…
Okay so nobody’s touching this one abi? it’s an ode and we’ll all pass. Always sad to lose loved ones, still you need to work on the delivery. most people would stop reading because of the incorrect spellings and bad lexicon. that said, it was a touching piece
Thanks thanks thanks to all ya that left a comment behind.