In Lovely Memory

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Sep 032012
 

 

Where are you now the one i cared for the most

can you take my hands i want to be close

 

you helped me when i was down

 

you lifted me up from the ground

 

you thought me right from wrong

 

you helped me to stay strong

 

where are u now the one with the kindest heart

 

its been 4 years i’v been torn apart

 

i wish you could take my hand and once again stay with me

 

i need you, you need me, how could you leave me

 

i’m broken, i’m shattered, dreams gone hope dashed fantasy lost

 

life judgement on us was unjust

 

there in heaven with you are hopes that were never raised

 

hands that would never give praise

 

ideas that would never  come to stay

 

beauty that would never be portrayed

 

my kids that would never see the day

 

our passion that were all betrayed

love that was never fulfilled

 

and a heart of mine dat may never be healed

 

its been 4 years you have been gone

 

4 years with my heart that mourn

 

4 years of lonely yawning

 

4 dead years with a life so boring

 

its been 4 years now, the days just come and go

 

but the pain never really leaves your soul

 

life can begin and end so fast

 

but the memory of you deary wil always last

 

where is the good in the goodbyes

 

when all it does is to leave ocean in my eyes

 

i would have sacrificied my life for you to be living

 

my spirit, our friendship, my soul i would have given

 

but its been 4 years so i want you to know that i loved you

 

and no matter how well you knew, i want you to love me too

 

i hope u are happy, i hope to see you soon

 

even if its like yearning to see the dark side of the moon

 

♥ IN MEMORY OF U, CUTE IB ♥

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Every day Nigerians lose people that are dear to them, death breaks our heart, leaving us lonely. This poem is dedicated to those that have lost the ones they loved, it could be father, mother, brother, sister, girlfriend, boyfriend, husband, wife or child. To their irreplaceable memory.

 

 

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  9 Responses to “In Lovely Memory”

  1. Avatar of Anzaa Msonter

    Nice piece, my brother.

  2. Avatar of Uzoma Ihejirika

    Ok. I think this poem is dedicated to someone who is dead. So, I would say sorry for that.

    Now to your poem: I think it needs work to make it shine.

  3. Avatar of Sunshine

    An Ode to a lost love. nice poem. Once in a lifetime ….

  4. Avatar of kaycee

    I know this isnt your best effort.

  5. Avatar of chemokopi

    There is some good stuff in somewhere.

  6. Avatar of sassystel

    Poignant…

  7. Avatar of Daireen

    Okay so nobody’s touching this one abi? it’s an ode and we’ll all pass. Always sad to lose loved ones, still you need to work on the delivery. most people would stop reading because of the incorrect spellings and bad lexicon. that said, it was a touching piece

  8. Avatar of Joecool_Lorenzo

    Thanks thanks thanks to all ya that left a comment behind.

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