Sep 052012
They never toiled
In your fields
As I did
But they reaped
Your harvest.
Yes, they bought
Your seedlings nourishments
But I nurtured
Them to fruition.
Now, your innards
They have ravaged
Leaving you
Aged and alone
All I am left with
I take home with me
Your name
For my unborn child.
(Inspired by the song “I took your name” by REM)
Is this and ode to a dead person? Cos unborn kid and you taking his/her name… :s
wow wow…amazing is an understatement…i want to write like this
This is nice and cool.
Ok