Sep 062012
What else can you do than kill
Hopes and plans and will
What else is your use than these;
Tears, pains and lease
A temporary mortgage you give
And return to receive your rent with grief
Just headstrong without relief
Not listening,
Not talking,
Not smiling.
A blow to change mode


Nice one.
Tight!
Cool poem.
Good but am not impressed!
Because it is short it is good. I like.
Straight!
Simple!
Abrupt!
I second @maisolomonic
Gbam!