My Daddy

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Aug 122012
 

THis one was written by my nine- year old daughter. I present it proudly, unedited.

Introduction
Hi everyone. Have you ever wondered who the best dad is? Well, we have the answer. Just go to www.best,best,best.dadever.com. It’s MagicMagnus!

Story
My dad is the best dad because he beats for a very good reason and he says Sorry every time and pets you. He has great talents like reading, playing chess and so on. He has a fantastic job as an accountant. Blue is his favorite colour. He likes to exercise every morning. He is free and he is well educated. Apart from being the best dad he is also the best husband and best accountant. He is rich and he even brings more money to our home. He likes teaching and learning good things like chess, books, playing, studying and so on. Every single day he is useful and I love him.

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  12 Responses to “My Daddy”

  1. No be small tin! Every Daddy is a hero, thank you for giving her a daddy to eulogise and love to all the Daddies out there, You rock the hands, that rock the craddles, that rock the world ;-)

  2. 9 year old wrote that?
    I know how foolish I was at age nine.
    Keep her up.

  3. honestly this is good- catch them young they say? please do just that.

  4. “Every single day he is useful..” this line cracked me up , it means she must have seen some other useless daddies before..lol.

    You have a bright child.

  5. This brought a smile to a gloomy day.

  6. She’s got your writing genes…Kids these days are way too smart. So, just keep being useful to her o… Give her a hug for me, would ya?…$ß

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